revise with feedback

aczechowski · web-flow · commit 09066ac22a8b · 2022-09-23T13:37:27.000-07:00
diff --git a/memdocs/autopilot/registration-overview.md b/memdocs/autopilot/registration-overview.md
@@ -48,7 +48,7 @@ When you register an Autopilot device, it automatically creates an Azure AD obje
 > - [Azure AD registered](/azure/active-directory/devices/concept-azure-ad-register), also known as "workplace joined"
 > - [Intune MDM-only enrollment](/mem/intune/enrollment/windows-enrollment-methods#user-self-enrollment-in-intune)
 >
-> These options are intended for users to join personally-owned devices to their organization's network. They doesn't register devices with Azure AD.
+> These options are intended for users to join personally-owned devices to their organization's network.
 
 Once a device is registered in Autopilot if a profile is not assigned, it will receive the default Autopilot profile. If you do not want a device to go through Autopilot, you must remove the Autopilot registration. 
 

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`@@ -48,7 +48,7 @@ When you register an Autopilot device, it automatically creates an Azure AD obje`
`48`	`48`	`> - [Azure AD registered](/azure/active-directory/devices/concept-azure-ad-register), also known as "workplace joined"`
`49`	`49`	`> - [Intune MDM-only enrollment](/mem/intune/enrollment/windows-enrollment-methods#user-self-enrollment-in-intune)`
`50`	`50`	`>`
`51`		`-> These options are intended for users to join personally-owned devices to their organization's network. They doesn't register devices with Azure AD.`
	`51`	`+> These options are intended for users to join personally-owned devices to their organization's network.`
`52`	`52`
`53`	`53`	`Once a device is registered in Autopilot if a profile is not assigned, it will receive the default Autopilot profile. If you do not want a device to go through Autopilot, you must remove the Autopilot registration.`
`54`	`54`