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Author: aczechowski

memdocs/autopilot/registration-overview.md

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 - [Automatic registration](automatic-registration.md)
 - [Manual registration](manual-registration.md)
 
-When an Autopilot device is registered, it automatically creates an Azure AD object. This object is needed by the Autopilot deployment process to identify the device before the user logs in. Deleting this record may result in the device failing to enroll through Autopilot. If the device is registered and not enrolled after 180 days, the device will need to be re-registered to complete a successful deployment.
+When you register an Autopilot device, it automatically creates an Azure AD object. The Autopilot deployment process needs this object to identify the device before the user signs in. If you delete this object, the device can fail to enroll through Autopilot. If the device is registered and not enrolled after 180 days, you'll need to re-register the device to complete a successful deployment.
 
 > [!NOTE]
 > Don't register to Autopilot the following types of devices: