From e0ffbd42e429f83c0e00ffda7a4900b7f6757258 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Priyankar Shukla <priyankarshukla22@gmail.com>
Date: Sat, 4 Jul 2026 19:55:54 +0530
Subject: [PATCH] Improve wording in TWL portal interface (T430924)

---
 .../templates/emails/approval_notification-body-html.html     | 2 +-
 .../templates/emails/approval_notification-body-text.html     | 2 +-
 TWLight/resources/filters.py                                  | 4 ++--
 TWLight/resources/templates/resources/filter_section.html     | 2 +-
 TWLight/users/templates/users/filter_section.html             | 2 +-
 TWLight/users/templates/users/my_applications.html            | 2 +-
 6 files changed, 7 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)

diff --git a/TWLight/emails/templates/emails/approval_notification-body-html.html b/TWLight/emails/templates/emails/approval_notification-body-html.html
index db0a639468..f21081e322 100644
--- a/TWLight/emails/templates/emails/approval_notification-body-html.html
+++ b/TWLight/emails/templates/emails/approval_notification-body-html.html
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@
   <p>Dear {{ user }},</p>
   <p>Thank you for applying for access to {{ partner }} resources through The Wikipedia Library. We are happy to inform you that your application has been approved.</p>
   <p>{{ user_instructions }}</p>
-  <p>You can view the collections you're authorized to access at My Library: {{ link }}</p>
+  <p>You can view the collections you're authorized to access at the My Library page: {{ link }}</p>
   <p>Cheers!</p>
   <p>The Wikipedia Library</p>
 {% endblocktranslate %}
diff --git a/TWLight/emails/templates/emails/approval_notification-body-text.html b/TWLight/emails/templates/emails/approval_notification-body-text.html
index 75aeb35764..64ae6c563b 100644
--- a/TWLight/emails/templates/emails/approval_notification-body-text.html
+++ b/TWLight/emails/templates/emails/approval_notification-body-text.html
@@ -9,7 +9,7 @@
 
 {{ user_instructions }}
 
-You can view the collections you're authorized to access at My Library: {{ link }}
+You can view the collections you're authorized to access at the My Library page: {{ link }}
 
 Cheers!
 
diff --git a/TWLight/resources/filters.py b/TWLight/resources/filters.py
index 78c758deb8..7857d5e208 100644
--- a/TWLight/resources/filters.py
+++ b/TWLight/resources/filters.py
@@ -13,7 +13,7 @@
     # Translators: On the MyLibrary page (https://wikipedialibrary.wmflabs.org/users/my_library), this indicates that a collection may be accessed immediately.
     (INSTANT, _("Instant (proxy) access")),
     # Translators: On the MyLibrary page (https://wikipedialibrary.wmflabs.org/users/my_library), this indicates that a collection may be accessed only after additional steps, such as submitting an application and awaiting approval.
-    (MULTI_STEP, _("Multi-step access")),
+    (MULTI_STEP, _("Access upon application")),
 )
 
 
@@ -75,7 +75,7 @@ class PartnerFilter(MainPartnerFilter):
 
     searchable = django_filters.MultipleChoiceFilter(
         # Translators: On the MyLibrary page (https://wikipedialibrary.wmflabs.org/users/my_library), this text is shown to indicate if a collection is searchable.
-        label=_("Searchable"),
+        label=_("Indexed in the Library's search engine"),
         choices=Partner.SEARCHABLE_CHOICES,
         widget=forms.CheckboxSelectMultiple,
     )
diff --git a/TWLight/resources/templates/resources/filter_section.html b/TWLight/resources/templates/resources/filter_section.html
index 9363eb1bd8..2b635d131e 100644
--- a/TWLight/resources/templates/resources/filter_section.html
+++ b/TWLight/resources/templates/resources/filter_section.html
@@ -51,6 +51,6 @@
     <div class="dropdown-divider"></div>
     {% comment %}Translators: On the Browse Partners page (https://wikipedialibrary.wmflabs.org/partners/), this is a placeholder for an input that helps users filter collections. {% endcomment %}
     <input id="collection-live-search" class="form-control form-control-sm mr-sm-2"
-        type="search" placeholder="{% trans 'Filter collections' %}" aria-label="Filter">
+        type="search" placeholder="{% trans 'Search the collection descriptions' %}" aria-label="Filter">
   </div>
 </nav>
diff --git a/TWLight/users/templates/users/filter_section.html b/TWLight/users/templates/users/filter_section.html
index 3254725fb2..eac5ae8ee0 100644
--- a/TWLight/users/templates/users/filter_section.html
+++ b/TWLight/users/templates/users/filter_section.html
@@ -79,6 +79,6 @@
     <div class="dropdown-divider"></div>
     {% comment %}Translators: On the MyLibrary page (https://wikipedialibrary.wmflabs.org/users/my_library), this is a placeholder for an input that helps users filter collections. {% endcomment %}
     <input id="collection-live-search" class="form-control form-control-sm mr-sm-2"
-        type="search" placeholder="{% trans 'Filter collections' %}" aria-label="Filter">
+        type="search" placeholder="{% trans 'Search the collection descriptions' %}" aria-label="Filter">
   </div>
 </nav>
diff --git a/TWLight/users/templates/users/my_applications.html b/TWLight/users/templates/users/my_applications.html
index 8dd01c1100..185f521c75 100644
--- a/TWLight/users/templates/users/my_applications.html
+++ b/TWLight/users/templates/users/my_applications.html
@@ -76,7 +76,7 @@ <h4>
                 <a class="btn twl-secondary-btn btn-sm" href="{% url 'applications:renew' app.pk %}">{% trans "Request renewal" %}</a>
               {% else %}
                 {% comment %}Translators: On the page listing applications, this text explains a user they cannot renew their application since they've already requested a renewal or there aren't any renewals available.{% endcomment %}
-                <em>{% trans "Renewals are either not required, not available right now, or you have already requested a renewal." %}</em>
+                <em>{% trans "It is not possible to request a renewal because it is not necessary, you have already requested one, or it is not currently available." %}</em>
               {% endif %}
             </div>
           {% endif %}