Update android-dedicated-devices-fully-managed-enroll.md

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memdocs/intune/enrollment/android-dedicated-devices-fully-managed-enroll.md

@@ -92,15 +92,16 @@ Scan the QR code from the enrollment profile to enroll devices running Android 8
 To use this method, zero-touch enrollment must be supported on devices and affiliated with a supplier that is part of the Android zero-touch enrollment service. For more information, such as prerequisites, where to purchase devices, and how to associate a Google Account with your corporate email, see [Zero-touch enrollment for IT admins](https://support.google.com/work/android/answer/7514005)(opens Android Enterprise Help). 
 
 This section describes how to:    
-* Enable the zero-touch enrollment iframe in the admin center  
-* Link a zero-touch account to Microsoft Intune and create a default zero-touch configuration 
-* Configure zero-touch configurations using the zero-touch enrollment portal  
+* Create a zero-touch configuration in the admin center 
+* Create a zero-touch configuration in the zero-touch enrollment portal  
 
-### Enable zero-touch iframe       
-Complete these prerequisites to enable the zero-touch iframe in the Microsoft Endpoint Manager admin center. The iframe lets you access the Google zero-touch enrollment portal from inside the admin center and reduces the number of screens you have to have open. To create configurations in the zero-touch enrollment portal instead, skip to [Create zero-touch configuration](android-dedicated-devices-fully-managed-enroll.md#create-zero-touch-configuration) in this section.  
+### Create zero-touch configuration in admin center        
+The zero-touch iframe lets you access the zero-touch enrollment portal from inside the Microsoft Endpoint Manager admin center. To enable the iframe, you must first add the *update app sync* permission and enable enrollment for corporate-owned, fully managed devices. After those steps are complete, the zero-touch enrollment option becomes visible in the admin center and you can link your account and create zero-touch configurations.  
+
+Complete the following steps to enable the iframe and create a new zero-touch configuration. To create configurations in the zero-touch enrollment portal instead, skip to [Create configuration in zero-touch enrollment portal](android-dedicated-devices-fully-managed-enroll.md#create-configuration-in-zero-touch-enrollment-portal).  
 
 #### Step 1: Add required permission   
-Add the *update app sync* permission.  
+Add the *update app sync* permission.     
 
 1. Sign in to the [Microsoft Endpoint Manager admin center](https://go.microsoft.com/fwlink/?linkid=2109431)
 admin.
@@ -114,14 +115,15 @@ admin.
 9. Select **Save**.  
 
 #### Step 2: Enable enrollment for corporate-owned devices  
+Verify that enrollment is enabled for corporate-owned, fully managed devices.   
 
 1. In the admin center, go to **Devices** > **Enroll devices**.  
 2. Select **Android enrollment**. 
 3. Under **Enrollment profiles**, choose **Corporate-owned, fully managed user devices**.  
 4. Verify that the setting for **Allow users to enroll corporate-owned user devices**, is set to **Yes**.             
 
-### Link zero-touch account to Intune    
-Link a zero-touch account with your Microsot Intune account. This procedure takes place in the admin center. After you link your device and creates the account's default configuration for zero-touch enabled devices that are fully managed.  
+#### Step 3: Link zero-touch account to Intune    
+Link a zero-touch account with your Microsot Intune account. This procedure takes place in the admin center. After you link your device, Intune creates a default configuration policy. The policy is applied to fully managed, zero-touch enabled devices that are without an existing configuration.   
 
 1. In the admin center, go to **Devices** > **Enroll devices**.  
 2. Select **Android enrollment**. 
@@ -132,18 +134,18 @@ Link a zero-touch account with your Microsot Intune account. This procedure take
 6. A default configuration is created and a screen appears with basic information about the new configuration. Intune will automatically apply the default to any zero-touch enabled device that's without an existing configuration. Select **Next** to continue.    
 
 > [!TIP]
-> The token used for the default configuration is for a fully managed device. If you want to create a zero-touch configuration for a corporate-owned work profile device or a dedicated device, see [Create configuration in Zero Touch](android-dedicated-devices-fully-managed-enroll.md#create-zero-touch-configuration) (in this article). 
+> The token used for the default configuration is for a fully managed device. If you want to create a zero-touch configuration for a corporate-owned work profile device or a dedicated device, see [Create configuration in zero-touch enrollment portal](android-dedicated-devices-fully-managed-enroll.md#create-configuration-in-zero-touch-enrollment-portal) (in this article). 
 6. Add support information to assist device users during setup. 
 7. Select **Save**.  
 
-Once your account is linked with Intune, zero-touch enabled devices are ready to receive the default configuration. You can view existing zero-touch configurations, edit support information, unlink the account, and link other accounts in the admin center. To change or create new configurations, use the steps in [Create a zero-touch configuration](android-dedicated-devices-fully-managed-enroll.md#create-zero-touch-configuration) (in this article).  
+Once your account is linked with Intune, zero-touch enabled devices are ready to receive the default configuration. You can view existing zero-touch configurations, edit support information, unlink the account, and link other accounts in the admin center.  
 
-### Create zero-touch configuration    
+### Create configuration in zero-touch enrollment portal       
 
 Add a zero-touch configuration in the Google zero-touch enrollment portal. If you haven't enabled the iframe in the Microsoft Endpoint Manager admin center, you can use the zero-touch enrollment portal to manage your configurations. You can create configurations for fully managed and dedicated devices, and corporate-owned devices with a work profile. 
 
-1. Sign in to the zero-touch enrollment portal with your Google Account.
-2. Select the option to add a new configuration.
+1. Sign in to the zero-touch enrollment portal with your Google account.
+2. Select the option to add a new configuration.  
 3. Fill out the information in the configuration panel. 
 4. Select **Microsoft Intune** as the EMM DPC app.   
 5. Copy the following JSON text into the DPC extras field. Replace `YourEnrollmentToken` with the enrollment token you created as part of your enrollment profile. Be sure to surround the enrollment token with double quotes.  
@@ -160,9 +162,7 @@ Add a zero-touch configuration in the Google zero-touch enrollment portal. If yo
             "com.google.android.apps.work.clouddpc.EXTRA_ENROLLMENT_TOKEN": "YourEnrollmentToken"
  6. Enter your organization's name and support information, which is shown on screen while users set up their devices.   
 
-For information about how to assign a default configruation or apply a configuration in the zero-touch portal, see [Zero-touch enrollment for IT admins](https://support.google.com/work/android/answer/7514005)(opens Android Enterprise Help).  
-
-
+For more information about how to assign a default configruation or apply a configuration in the zero-touch portal, see [Zero-touch enrollment for IT admins](https://support.google.com/work/android/answer/7514005)(opens Android Enterprise Help).  
 
 ## Enroll by using Knox Mobile Enrollment
 To use Samsung's Knox Mobile Enrollment, the device must be running Android OS version 8.0 or later and Samsung Knox 2.8 or higher. For more information, learn [how to automatically enroll your devices with Knox Mobile Enrollment](./android-samsung-knox-mobile-enroll.md).