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Author: Brenduns

memdocs/intune/protect/windows-update-rollout-options.md

@@ -81,11 +81,13 @@ With intelligent rollouts, the Windows Update for Business Deployment Service us
 To enable intelligent rollout, you deploy a [settings catalog](../configuration/settings-catalog.md) profile for device configuration to *Allow WUfB Cloud Processing*. Then, you assign the profile to the same groups that you use with your Feature update profiles.
 
 > [!NOTE]
-> The Windows Update for Business setting that you enable, *Allow WUfB Cloud Processing*, is the same setting that enables the Deployment Service to create *likely issue* [safeguard holds](/windows/deployment/update/update-compliance-feature-update-status#safeguard-holds) for a device. If you previously configured devices to [opt-out of safeguard holds](/windows/deployment/update/update-compliance-feature-update-status#opt-out-of-safeguard-holds), this policy will override that configuration and reenable the use of safeguard holds for devices.
+> The Windows Update for Business setting that you enable, *Allow WUfB Cloud Processing*, is the same setting that enables the Deployment Service to create *likely issue* for a device. To learn more, see [Safeguard holds](/windows/deployment/update/update-compliance-feature-update-status#safeguard-holds) in the documentation for Update Compliance monitoring.
 
-As your rollout progresses, the deployment service monitors for unexpected issues. The service leverages insights from the Windows ecosystem and will create *likely issue* safeguard holds and proactively pause deployments to devices that are likely to encounter an issue. This behavior provides an increased opportunity to identify the largest pool of potential issues while affecting the fewest number of devices. To learn more, see [Manage safeguards using the Windows Update for Business deployment service - Microsoft Graph | Microsoft Docs](/graph/windowsupdates-manage-safeguards).
+As your rollout progresses, the deployment service monitors for unexpected issues. The service leverages insights from the Windows ecosystem and will create *likely issue* safeguard holds and proactively pause deployments to devices that are likely to encounter an issue. By applying safeguard holds to devices that are likley to have issues with the udpate, there is opportunity to identify the largest pool of potential issues while affecting the fewest number of devices,  protecting end users from potential productivity affecting issues.
 
-### Create an intelligent rollout policy
+To learn more, see [Manage safeguards using the Windows Update for Business deployment service](/graph/windowsupdates-manage-safeguards) in the Graph API documentation for device updates.
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+### Enable intelligent rollouts
 
 1. Sign in to the [Microsoft Endpoint Manager admin center](https://go.microsoft.com/fwlink/?linkid=2109431).