Update memdocs/intune/remote-actions/device-locate.md

Co-authored-by: JohanFreelancer9 <[email protected]>

Author: msbemba

memdocs/intune/remote-actions/device-locate.md

@@ -37,7 +37,7 @@ In addition to identifying the location a lost or stolen device on a map, some p
 - Use a *lost device sound alert* on a phone to help a user locate the device should it be behind a chair or otherwise out-of-sight.
 - Report on the time and location of a devices *last known location*, which can help when the device is off-line, or can’t be reached to verify where it is at. *(Android Enterprise dedicated devices only)*
 
-Windows location services need to enabled during Windows Out of Box Experience(OOBE), by the user, or using policy [Privacy > LetAppsAccessLocation](/windows/client-management/mdm/policy-csp-privacy#privacy-letappsaccesslocation) for them to be able to locate the device.
+You need to enable Windows location services in Windows Out of Box Experience (OOBE) or by using the [Privacy > LetAppsAccessLocation](/windows/client-management/mdm/policy-csp-privacy#privacy-letappsaccesslocation) policy to be able to locate the device.
 
 ## Supported platforms