acro fixes

Author: ErikjeMS

windows-365/enterprise/TOC.yml

@@ -25,7 +25,7 @@ items:
     href: device-images.md
   - name: Lifecycle and operating system end of support
     href: end-of-support.md
-  - name: Customer permission
+  - name: Customer permissions
     href: customer-permissions.md  
   - name: Device configuration with MEM
     href: device-configuration.md

windows-365/enterprise/customer-permissions.md

@@ -39,9 +39,9 @@ Windows 365 uses the Azure role-based access control (RBAC) permissions required
 
 ## Create on-premises network connections
 
-You create OPNCs to define the connection between your network and the Windows 365 system so that Cloud PCs can be successfully provisioned. When you create an OPNC the Windows 365 service requires the following permissions:
+You create OPNCs to define the connection between your network and the Windows 365 system so that Cloud PCs can be successfully provisioned. When you create an OPNC, the Windows 365 service requires the following permissions:
 
-- **Reader permission on the Azure subscription**: This permission is used to simplify the add a custom image flow.
+- **Reader permission on the Azure subscription**: This permission is used to simplify the flow when adding a custom image.
 - **Network contributor on the specified resource group**: This permission is used to create network interface cards in the selected resource group.
 - **Network contributor on the virtual network**: This permission is used to attach the created network interface cards to the selected virtual network. 
 
@@ -51,7 +51,7 @@ For more information, see [Create on-premises network connection](create-on-prem
 
 ## Add a custom image
 
-If you’ve already created an OPNC for the Azure subscription that’s associated with the image, no new permissions are needed.
+If you’ve already created an OPNC for the image's associated Azure subscription, no new permissions are needed.
 
 When you use a subscription without an OPNC, the Windows 365 service requires the following permission to upload a custom image:
 
@@ -64,4 +64,4 @@ For more information, see [Add or delete custom device images](add-device-images
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 ## Next steps
 
-[What is Azure role-based access control (Azure RBAC)](/azure/role-based-access-control/overview).
+[What is Azure role-based access control (Azure RBAC)](/azure/role-based-access-control/overview)?