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Author: aczechowski

memdocs/configmgr/protect/plan-design/bitlocker-management.md

@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
 title: Plan for BitLocker management
 titleSuffix: Configuration Manager
 description: Plan for managing BitLocker Drive Encryption with Configuration Manager.
-ms.date: 12/01/2021
+ms.date: 02/01/2022
 ms.prod: configuration-manager
 ms.technology: configmgr-protect
 ms.topic: conceptual
@@ -135,9 +135,9 @@ BitLocker management doesn't support all client types that are generally support
 
 - BitLocker management isn't supported on virtual machines (VMs) or on server editions. For example, BitLocker management won't start the encryption on fixed drives of virtual machines. Additionally fixed drives in virtual machines may show as compliant even though they aren't encrypted.
 
-- In version 2010 and earlier, Azure Active Directory (Azure AD)-joined, workgroup clients, or clients in untrusted domains aren't supported. In these older versions, BitLocker management in Configuration Manager only supports devices that are joined to on-premises Active Directory including hybrid Azure AD-joined devices. This configuration is to authenticate with the recovery service to escrow keys.
+- In version 2010 and earlier, Azure Active Directory (Azure AD)-joined, workgroup clients, or clients in untrusted domains aren't supported. In these earlier versions of Configuration Manager, BitLocker management only supports devices that are joined to on-premises Active Directory including hybrid Azure AD-joined devices. This configuration is to authenticate with the recovery service to escrow keys.
 
-  Starting in version 2103, Configuration Manager supports all client join types for BitLocker management, however, the client-side BitLocker user interface component is still only supported on Active Directory, and hybrid Azure Active Directory joined devices.
+  Starting in version 2103, Configuration Manager supports all client join types for BitLocker management. However, the client-side BitLocker user interface component is still only supported on Active Directory-joined and hybrid Azure AD-joined devices.
 
 - Starting in version 2010, you can now manage BitLocker policies and escrow recovery keys over a [cloud management gateway (CMG)](../../core/clients/manage/cmg/overview.md). This change also provides support for BitLocker management via internet-based client management (IBCM). There's no change to the setup process for BitLocker management. This improvement supports domain-joined and hybrid domain-joined devices.<!--6979223--> For more information, see [Deploy management agent: Recovery service](../deploy-use/bitlocker/recovery-service.md).