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windows-365/business/add-user-assign-licenses.md

@@ -40,4 +40,4 @@ You can add a user and assign them licenses by following these steps:
 6. If you want to specify a password, de-select the **Automatically create a password** box. Then, enter a password.
 7. If you don’t want to require the user to change their password when they first sign into the new Cloud PC, de-select the **This user must change their password when they first sign in** box.
 8. If you don't want to automatically email the sign-in info to the user, de-select **Email the sign-in info** box.
-9. Select **Add user**. A new Cloud PC will be created and the user can use the sign in information to access it.
+9. Select **Add user**. A new Cloud PC will be created and the user can use the sign-in information to access it.

windows-365/business/apps-install.md

@@ -43,7 +43,7 @@ Some apps may require that the user have administrator privileges. To change a u
 
 ## Default apps
 
-The following apps are pre-installed on Windows 365 Business Cloud PCs when they are created:
+The following apps are pre-installed on Windows 365 Business Cloud PCs when they're created:
 
 - [Microsoft 365 Apps for Enterprise](/mem/intune/apps/apps-add-office365) (formerly Office 365 Pro Plus)
 - Microsoft Teams

windows-365/business/cloud-pc-location.md

@@ -32,8 +32,8 @@ ms.collection: M365-identity-device-management
 
 Windows 365 Business Cloud PCs are created in a location based on the billing address country of your organization. The billing address is used to determine two things:
 
-1. Whether Windows 365 is available for purchase in that region.
-2. Where Windows 365 Cloud PCs are created.
+- Whether Windows 365 is available for purchase in that region.
+- Where Windows 365 Cloud PCs are created.
 
 ## Check if Windows 365 Business is available in your country
 
@@ -49,9 +49,9 @@ When a Cloud PC license is assigned, it’s created in a particular geographic l
 
 1. In your internet browser, go to [Where your Microsoft customer data is stored article](/microsoft-365/enterprise/o365-data-locations).
 2. Find the country that corresponds to your billing address and select **Click to expand**.
-3. The **Exchange Online** row identifies the location that your Cloud PC is created by default. If there is no capacity in the that location, your Cloud PC will be created in the nearest location with capacity.
+3. The **Exchange Online** row identifies the location that your Cloud PC is created by default. If there's no capacity in that location, your Cloud PC will be created in the nearest location with capacity.
 
-The billing address country doesn’t mean that the Cloud PC will necessarily reside in that country. Cloud PCs are created in the nearest supported location with available capacity. This may or may not be  the billing address country.
+The billing address country doesn’t mean that the Cloud PC will necessarily reside in that country. Cloud PCs are created in the nearest supported location with available capacity. This location may or may not be  the billing address country.
 
 ## Next steps
 

windows-365/business/get-started-windows-365-business.md

@@ -43,7 +43,7 @@ This article is for people who plan to buy and set up Windows 365 Business for t
 
 There are no licensing prerequisites to set up Windows 365 Business.
 
-For the best onboarding experience, refer to the [setup troubleshooting guide](troubleshoot-windows-365-business.md). This article can help make sure you optimize your environment preferences for Windows 365 Business. For example, the guide can help you if you are using multi-factor authentication, Conditional Access policies, or Intune in your environment.
+For the best onboarding experience, refer to the [setup troubleshooting guide](troubleshoot-windows-365-business.md). This article can help make sure you optimize your environment preferences for Windows 365 Business. For example, the guide can help you if you're using multi-factor authentication, Conditional Access policies, or Intune in your environment.
 
 ## Buy subscriptions
 
@@ -61,7 +61,7 @@ If you don't already have a Microsoft 365 subscription, you can buy your Windows
 1. On the [Windows 365 Business](https://www.microsoft.com/windows-365/business) page, select **See plans and pricing**.
 2. On the next page, select the subscription you want to purchase, and then select **Buy now**.
 3. On the **Thank you for choosing Windows 365 Business** page, follow the steps to set up your account.
-4. In **step 5 - Confirmation details**, if you are ready to assign licenses to users, select **Get started** to go to your [Windows 365 home page](https://windows365.microsoft.com).
+4. In **step 5 - Confirmation details**, if you're ready to assign licenses to users, select **Get started** to go to your [Windows 365 home page](https://windows365.microsoft.com).
 5. On the Windows 365 home page, in the **Quick actions** section, select **Manage your organization**. This link takes you to the Microsoft 365 admin center where you can assign licenses to users.
 
 Users without the Global or Billing admin roles can use self-service purchase to buy a subscription for Windows 365 Business directly from the [Windows 365 Business products site](https://www.microsoft.com/windows-365/business?rtc=1). A user who buys a subscription this way is granted a limited view of the [Microsoft 365 admin center](https://go.microsoft.com/fwlink/p/?linkid=2024339), where they can assign licenses for that subscription to other users in their organization. Assigning a license to another user automatically creates a Windows 365 Business Cloud PC for them, which can be accessed from the [Windows 365 home page](https://windows365.microsoft.com/).
@@ -93,7 +93,7 @@ Whether you purchased your subscriptions through the Windows 365 products site,
 - The **Billing** page in the Microsoft 365 admin center. For more information, see [assign licenses to users](/microsoft-365/admin/manage/assign-licenses-to-users).
 - [windows365.microsoft.com](https://windows365.microsoft.com). For more information, see [Assign or unassign a license](assign-unassign-license.md).
 
-As soon as you assign a license to a user, Windows 365 will create a Cloud PC for that user. This can take up to 30 minutes.
+As soon as you assign a license to a user, Windows 365 will create a Cloud PC for that user. This process can take up to 30 minutes.
 
 You can assign different Windows 365 Business license types to a user, based on the users business need. See [Windows 365 Business sizing options](windows-365-business-sizing.md)  for guidance on which license type might be suitable for your users.
 

windows-365/business/known-issues.md

@@ -86,11 +86,11 @@ Sending outbound email messages directly on port 25 from a Windows 365 Business
 
 If your email service uses Simple Mail Transfer Protocol (SMTP) for your email client application, you can use their web interface, if available.
 
-Or you can ask your email service provider for help to configure their email client app to use secure SMTP over Transport Layer Security (TLS), which uses a different port.
+Or you can ask your email service provider for help with configuring their email client app to use secure SMTP over Transport Layer Security (TLS), which uses a different port.
 
 ## Virtual Private Network support<!--38270291-->
 
-Because of the many Virtual Private Network (VPN) solutions available, Microsoft can't confirm which services work with Windows 365 Business. For more information, consult your VPN provider. For organizations that have advanced networking needs, Windows 365 Enterprise is recommended. For more information, see [Network requirements](../enterprise/requirements-network.md).
+Because of the many Virtual Private Network (VPN) solutions available, Microsoft can't confirm which services work with Windows 365 Business. If you need more information, consult with your VPN provider. For organizations that have advanced networking needs, Windows 365 Enterprise is recommended. For more information, see [Network requirements](../enterprise/requirements-network.md).
 
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