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Author: MandiOhlinger

memdocs/intune/fundamentals/filters-reports-troubleshoot.md

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 title: Filter reports and troubleshooting in Microsoft Intune
-description: Use the device and app filter reports to get more information on successfully applied filters. Learn the impact of include and exclude filters in Microsoft Intune.
+description: Use the device and app filter reports to get more information on successfully applied filters. Learn the effect of include and exclude filters in Microsoft Intune.
 keywords:
 author: MandiOhlinger
 ms.author: mandia
@@ -68,7 +68,7 @@ To see this report, use the following steps:
 
 In the following example, you can see this information for the **TestDevice**:
 
-:::image type="content" source="./media/filters-reports-troubleshoot/filter-properties-single-device.png" alt-text="Screenshot that shows how to see the date, time, evaluation results, and other device filter assignment properties in Microsoft Microsoft Intune.":::
+:::image type="content" source="./media/filters-reports-troubleshoot/filter-properties-single-device.png" alt-text="Screenshot that shows how to see the date, time, evaluation results, and other device filter assignment properties in Microsoft Intune.":::
 
 > [!IMPORTANT]
 > 
@@ -118,11 +118,20 @@ Use the following table to help understand when you include or exclude devices:
 ### What you need to know
 
 - A **Not evaluated** filter result may show when a policy has a conflicting assignment on the device. For more information, see [Filters and assignment conflict resolution](#filters-and-assignment-conflict-resolution) (in this article).
-- Filters are evaluated at enrollment and device check-in. The evaluation can also run at other times, such as a compliance check. You may experience race conditions in some scenarios, for example consider this sequence of events (with T representing different points in time):
-    - T1 - You assign an App to a group of users using a filter based on the "Category" property.
-    - T2 - A targeted user enrolls a new device. The device enrolls and checks-in, evaluating the associated category filter. Since there was no category set on the device,  filter evaluation is based on a null category string. In the case where a filter was working in "Exclude" mode, the app could be installed having not matched the criteria for exclusion.
-    - T3 - The user is then prompted to choose a device category in the Company Portal app but enrollment and check-in has already completed. 
-    - T4 - On the next device check-in, the category property has been updated in the system and now returns a different filter evaluation result, however the app was already installed and will not be automatically removed.
+- Filters are evaluated at enrollment and when the device checks in with the Intune service. The evaluation can also run at other times, such as a compliance check. In some scenarios, you can experience race conditions.
+
+  For example, consider the following sequence of events, where each time is a different point in time:
+
+  - Time1: You assign an app to a users group. This group uses a filter based on the "Category" property.
+  - Time2: A targeted user enrolls a new device and checks in with the Intune service. During the check-in, the category filter evaluates. Since a category isn't set on the device yet, the filter evaluates as a null category, and the app installs.
+
+    If a filter was working in "Exclude" mode, then the app could be installed since it might not match the exclusion criteria.
+
+  - Time3: In the Company Portal app, the user is prompted to choose a device category. Remember, enrollment and check-in is already completed.
+  - Time4: On the next device check-in, the category property updates and now returns a different filter evaluation result. Remember, the app was already installed. And, it won't be automatically removed.
+
+  For approximate check-in times, go to [How long does it take for devices to get a policy, profile, or app after they're assigned?](../configuration/device-profile-troubleshoot.md#how-long-does-it-take-for-devices-to-get-a-policy-profile-or-app-after-they-are-assigned)
+
 - The latest filter evaluation results are stored for 30 days. If the logs are expired, you may see a **We were not able to retrieve any filter evaluation results** message.
 
 ## Filters and assignment conflict resolution
@@ -189,17 +198,17 @@ For example:
 
 In this scenario, the winning app intent is **Required**. For more information, see [conflicts between app intents](../apps/apps-deploy.md#how-conflicts-between-app-intents-are-resolved). So, DeviceA must only evaluate FilterA. If DeviceA matches the rules in FilterA, DeviceA receives AppA as a required app.
 
-Apps use special behavior when resolving conflicts between **Required** and **Available** assignments. If a user or device is targeted with both **Available** and **Required** assignments, then it receives a merged intent called **Required and Available**. The device must evaluate filters used in both assignments. When evaluating both filters, the device implements the same conflict resolution: [Filter mode](#filter-mode) and ["OR" logic when filter modes are the same](#use-or-logic-when-filter-modes-are-the-same).
+Apps use special behavior when resolving conflicts between **Required** and **Available** assignments. If a user or device is targeted with both **Available** and **Required** assignments, then it receives a merged intent called **Required and Available**. The device must evaluate filters used in both assignments. When it evaluates both filters, the device implements the same conflict resolution: [Filter mode](#filter-mode) and ["OR" logic when filter modes are the same](#use-or-logic-when-filter-modes-are-the-same).
 
 ## Conflict resolution matrix
 
 In the following example, there's a conflict between assignments because the same user/device is in both assignments:
 
 :::image type="content" source="./media/filters-reports-troubleshoot/example-conflict-same-group-user-policy-assignment.png" alt-text="Screenshot that shows an example assignment conflict when using filters in Microsoft Intune.":::
 
-The following matrix explains the impact, depending on the conflict scenario:
+The following matrix explains the effect, depending on the conflict scenario:
 
-:::image type="content" source="./media/filters-reports-troubleshoot/conflict-matrix.png" alt-text="Screenshot that shows that the conflict impact depends on the setting configured when using filters in Microsoft Intune.":::
+:::image type="content" source="./media/filters-reports-troubleshoot/conflict-matrix.png" alt-text="Screenshot that shows that the conflict effect depends on the setting configured when using filters in Microsoft Intune.":::
 
 ## Next steps
 

memdocs/intune/fundamentals/toc.yml

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     href: quickstart-create-custom-role.md
 - name: Tutorials
   items:
-  - name: Walkthrough Intune in Microsoft Endpoint Manager
+  - name: Walkthrough Intune in Endpoint Manager admin center
     href: tutorial-walkthrough-endpoint-manager.md 
 - name: Concepts
   items: