2203 OOB article draft revision

Author: bhuney

memdocs/configmgr/hotfix/2203/14480034.md

@@ -11,16 +11,17 @@ author: bhuney
 ms.author: brianhun
 manager: dougeby
 ---
-# Client registration fails after updating to Configuration Manager current branch, version 2203
+# Registration fails for PKI clients after updating to Configuration Manager current branch, version 2203
 
 *Applies to: Configuration Manager (current branch, version 2203)*
 
 ## Summary of KB14480034
-The client registration process fails for the following scenarios after updating to Configuration Manager current branch, version 2203.
-- Newly installed workgroup clients.
-- Existing domain-joined clients, either Active Directory (AD) or Azure Active Directory (Azure AD), that attempt to renew their public key infrastructure (PKI) client authentication certificate but are unable to authenticate against the domain. 
-- Clients that are joining an AD or Azure AD domain for the first time but are unable to authenticate against the domain. 
+The registration process fails after updating to Configuration Manager current branch, version 2203 for clients using public key infrastructure (PKI) for client authentication, but are unable to authenticate against the domain. This affects the following scenarios:
 
+ - Newly installed workgroup clients using PKI.
+ - Clients that are joining an AD or Azure AD domain for the first time, generating a new device identity.
+ - Existing clients that are trying to renew their client authentication certificate.
+ 
 When this issue happens, the following error is logged in the DDM.log file on the site server for each affected client.
    ```text
    ClientIdentity is not a hex string