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Author: MandiOhlinger

memdocs/intune/includes/windows-phone-81-windows-10-mobile-support.md

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 > [!IMPORTANT]
-> Microsoft Intune is ending support on October 21, 2022 for devices running Windows 8.1. After that date, technical assistance and automatic updates that help protect your devices running Windows 8.1 will no longer be available. For more information, go to [Plan for Change: Ending support for Windows 8.1](../fundamentals/whats-new.md#plan-for-change-ending-support-for-windows-81-).
+> On October 22, 2022, Microsoft Intune is ending support for devices running Windows 8.1. After that date, technical assistance and automatic updates on these devices won't be available. For more information, go to [Plan for Change: Ending support for Windows 8.1](../fundamentals/whats-new.md#plan-for-change-ending-support-for-windows-81-).
 >
-> If you currently use Windows 8.1, then we recommend moving to Windows 10/11 devices. Windows 10/11 has built-in security and device features that have a first class integration with Microsoft Intune.
+> If you currently use Windows 8.1, then we recommend moving to Windows 10/11 devices. Windows 10/11 has built-in security and device features that can be easily managed in Microsoft Intune.
 
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