Merge pull request #7095 from Brenduns/kpi-improvement-tasks

Content improvement KPI work - various

Author: PRMerger7

memdocs/intune/fundamentals/tenant-status.md

@@ -3,12 +3,12 @@
 
 title: Microsoft Intune Tenant Status page
 titleSuffix: Microsoft Intune
-description: Use the Intune Tenant Status page to view important tenant details
+description: If you use Microsoft Intune, use the Tenant Status page to view details about your tenant, the status of Intune connectors you've configured, view recent service health incidents and advisories.
 keywords:
 author: brenduns
 ms.author: brenduns
 manager: dougeby
-ms.date: 08/17/2021
+ms.date: 03/23/2022
 ms.topic: conceptual
 ms.service: microsoft-intune
 ms.subservice: fundamentals

memdocs/intune/protect/endpoint-protection-windows-10.md

@@ -1,13 +1,12 @@
 ---
 # required metadata
-title: Settings you can deploy with Intune to protect managed Windows devices
-description: On Windows 10 or Windows 11 devices, configure endpoint protection settings to enable Microsoft Defender features, including Application Guard, Firewall, SmartScreen, encryption and BitLocker, Exploit Guard, Application Control, Security Center, and security on local devices in Microsoft Intune.
-keywords:
+title: Windows 10/11 settings you can deploy with Microsoft Intune to protect managed Windows devices
+description: Use Microsoft Intune endpoint protection profiles to manage settings that help protect your enrolled Windows 10 and 11 devices. 
 author: brenduns
 ms.author: brenduns
 manager: dougeby
 ms.date: 02/03/2022
-ms.topic: conceptual
+ms.topic: reference
 ms.service: microsoft-intune
 
 # optional metadata

memdocs/intune/protect/software-updates-ios.md

@@ -2,12 +2,12 @@
 # required metadata
 
 title: Configure iOS/iPadOS software update policies in Microsoft Intune
-description: In Microsoft Intune, create or add a configuration policy to restrict when software updates automatically install on iOS/iPadOS devices. You can choose the date and time when updates aren't installed. You can also assign this policy to groups, users, or devices, and check for any installation failures. 
+description: Use Microsoft Intune to manage system updates for supervised iOS/iPadOS devices.
 keywords:
 author: brenduns 
 ms.author: brenduns
 manager: dougeby
-ms.date: 06/15/2021
+ms.date: 03/23/2022
 ms.topic: how-to
 ms.service: microsoft-intune
 ms.subservice: protect
@@ -30,18 +30,18 @@ ms.collection:
 
 # Add iOS/iPadOS software update policies in Intune
 
-Software update policies apply to supervised iOS/iPadOS devices to install OS updates. [Supervised devices](../enrollment/device-enrollment-program-enroll-ios.md#what-is-supervised-mode) are devices that enrolled using either Apple Business Manager or Apple School Manager.
-
-When configuring a policy to deploy updates, you can:
-
-- Choose to deploy the *latest update* that's available, or choose to deploy an older update by the update version number if you don't want to deploy the latest update. If you choose to deploy an older update, you must also set a Device Configuration policy to restrict visibility of software updates.
-- Specify a schedule that determines when the update installs. Schedules can be as simple as installing updates the next time that the device checks in, or creating date and time ranges during which updates can install or are blocked from installing.
+Use Microsoft Intune device configuration profiles to manage software updates for iOS/iPad devices that enrolled as supervised devices. [Supervised devices](../enrollment/device-enrollment-program-enroll-ios.md#what-is-supervised-mode) are devices that enrolled using either Apple Business Manager or Apple School Manager.
 
 This feature applies to:
 
 - iOS 10.3 and later (supervised)
 - iPadOS 13.0 and later (supervised)
 
+When configuring a policy to deploy updates, you can:
+
+- Choose to deploy the *latest update* that's available, or choose to deploy an older update, based on the update version number. If you choose to deploy an older update, you must also set a Device Configuration policy to restrict visibility of software updates.
+- Specify a schedule that determines when the update installs. Schedules can be as simple as installing updates the next time that the device checks in, or creating date and time ranges during which updates can install or are blocked from installing.
+
 By default, devices check in with Intune about every 8 hours. If an update is available through an update policy, the device downloads the update. The device then installs the update upon next check-in within your schedule configuration. Profiles don't prevent users from updating the OS manually. Users can be prevented from updating the OS manually with a Device Configuration policy to restrict visibility of software updates.
 
 > [!NOTE]
@@ -87,7 +87,7 @@ Consider testing to assess the impact of OS updates on the app you are running i
        If you don't configure times to start or end, the configuration results in no restriction and updates can install at any time.  
 
        > [!NOTE]
-       > You can configure settings in [Device Restrictions](../configuration/device-restrictions-ios.md#general) to hide an update from device users for a period of time on your supervised iOS/iPadOS devices. A restriction period can give you time to test an update before its visible to users to install. After the device restriction period expires, the update becomes visible to users. Users can then choose to install it, or your Software update policies might automatically install it soon after.
+       > You can configure settings in [Device Restrictions](../configuration/device-restrictions-ios.md#general) to hide an update from device users for a period of time on your supervised iOS/iPadOS devices. A restriction period can give you time to test an update before it's visible to users to install. After the device restriction period expires, the update becomes visible to users. Users can then choose to install it, or your Software update policies might automatically install it soon after.
        >
        > When you use a device restriction to hide an update, review your software update policies to ensure they wont schedule the install of the update before that restriction period ends. Software update policies install updates based on their own schedule, regardless of the update being hidden or visible to the device user.