Update create-on-premises-network-connection.md

Author: ErikjeMS

windows-365/enterprise/create-on-premises-network-connection.md

@@ -47,7 +47,7 @@ To create an OPNC, you must:
 - Be an [Intune Administrator in Azure AD](/azure/active-directory/roles/permissions-reference).
 - Have [Owner permissions on the Azure subscription](/azure/cost-management-billing/manage/add-change-subscription-administrator) that contains the virtual network with connectivity to your on-premises domain controller and network.
 - Make sure that your PowerShell execution policy is configured to allow RemoteSigned scripts. If you use Group Policy to set execution policy, make sure that the Group Policy Object (GPO) targeted at the Organizational Unit (OU) defined in the OPNC is configured to allow RemoteSigned scripts. For more information, see [Set-ExecutionPolicy](/powershell/module/microsoft.powershell.security/set-executionpolicy).
-- For Disaster Recovery purposes, please ensure there are at least 50% of the IP addresses available in your subnet. If reprovisioning for DR is required, sufficient  new IP address will be required for each Cloud PC provisioned on the subnet. 
+- For Disaster Recovery (DR) purposes, make sure that there are at least 50% of the IP addresses available in your subnet. If reprovisioning for DR is required, sufficient new IP address are required for each Cloud PC provisioned on the subnet. 
 
 ## Create an OPNC