Merge pull request #8385 from ErikjeMS/win365

changes per Tracey

Author: prmerger-automator[bot]

windows-365/enterprise/health-checks.md

@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@ keywords:
 author: ErikjeMS
 ms.author: erikje
 manager: dougeby
-ms.date: 08/30/2022
+ms.date: 09/07/2022
 ms.topic: how-to
 ms.service: cloudpc
 ms.subservice:
@@ -64,7 +64,7 @@ Every failed ANC or success with warning error state includes the technical deta
 - **First party app permissions exist on Azure virtual network**: Sufficient permissions exist on the Azure vNet.
 - **Environment and configuration is ready**: Underlying infrastructure is ready for provisioning to succeed.
 - **Intune enrollment restrictions allow Windows enrollment**: Verify that Intune enrollment restrictions are configured to allow Windows enrollment.
-- **Localization language package readiness**: TVerify that the operating system and Microsoft 365 language packages were installed.
+- **Localization language package readiness**: Verify that the operating system and Microsoft 365 language packages can install. Also verify that the localization package download link is reachable.
 
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 ## Next steps

windows-365/enterprise/whats-new.md

@@ -56,7 +56,7 @@ Learn what new features are available in Windows 365 Enterprise.
 
 #### New health check: Localization language package readiness<!--41089729  -->
 
-The **Azure network connection** tab has a new health check: **Localization language package readiness**. This health check verifies that the operating system and Microsoft 365 language packages were installed. For more information, see [Azure network connection health checks](health-checks.md).
+The **Azure network connection** tab has a new health check: **Localization language package readiness**. This health check verifies that the operating system and Microsoft 365 language packages can install.  It also makes sure that the localization package download link is reachable. For more information, see [Azure network connection health checks](health-checks.md).
 
 #### Review Cloud PC connectivity health checks and errors in Microsoft Endpoint Manager admin center<!--38469622 -->