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Author: Brenduns

memdocs/intune/protect/endpoint-protection-macos.md

@@ -48,11 +48,11 @@ For more information about Apple FileVault settings, see [FDEFileVault](https://
   - **Not configured** (*default*)
   - **Yes**
 
-  When *Enable FileVault* is set to *Yes*, a personal recovery key is generated for the device during encryption and the following settings apply to that key:
+  When *Enable FileVault* is set to *Yes*, a personal recovery key is generated for the device during encryption, and the following settings apply to that key:
 
   - **Escrow location description of personal recovery key**
 
-    Specify a short message to the user that explains how and where they can retrieve their personal recovery key. This text is inserted into the message the user sees on their sign in screen when prompted to enter their personal recovery key if a password is forgotten.
+    Specify a short message to the user that explains how and where they can retrieve their personal recovery key. This text is inserted into the message the user sees on their sign-in screen when prompted to enter their personal recovery key if a password is forgotten.
 
   - **Personal recovery key rotation**
 
@@ -113,7 +113,7 @@ Use the firewall to control connections per-application, rather than per-port. U
 
   **Apps allowed**: Configure a list of apps that are allowed to receive incoming connections.
 
-  - **Add apps by bundle ID**: Enter the *bundle ID* of the app. On macOS devices, you can get the bundle ID using the Terminal app and AppleScript: `osascript -e 'id of app "AppName"`. Apple's web site has a list of [built-in Apple apps](https://support.apple.com/HT208094) for iOS and iPadOS, but .
+  - **Add apps by bundle ID**: Enter the *bundle ID* of the app. On macOS devices, you can get the bundle ID using the Terminal app and AppleScript: `osascript -e 'id of app "AppName"`. Apple's web site has a list of [built-in Apple apps](https://support.apple.com/HT208094).
   - **Add store app**: Select a store app you previously added in Intune. For more information, see [Add apps to Microsoft Intune](../apps/apps-add.md).
 
   **Apps blocked**: Configure a list of apps that have incoming connections blocked.