editorial revision

Author: aczechowski

memdocs/configmgr/core/get-started/2022/includes/2205/14046376.md

@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 ---
-author: Banreet Kaur
+author: Banreet
 ms.author: banreetkaur
 ms.prod: configuration-manager
 ms.technology: configmgr-core
@@ -20,10 +20,10 @@ For more information about PowerShell for Configuration Manager, see [Get starte
 
 #### Approve-CMOrchestrationGroupScript
 
-This cmdlet would help user to approve orchestration group script.
+Use this cmdlet to approve an orchestration group script. For more information, see [About orchestration groups in Configuration Manager](../../../../../sum/deploy-use/orchestration-groups.md).
 
 ```powershell
-$referenceOG = Get-CMOrchestrationGroup -Name $Script:OGName
+$referenceOG = Get-CMOrchestrationGroup -Name "Orchestratrion group 1"
 $preScript = $referenceOG | Get-CMOrchestrationGroupScript -ScriptType Pre
 $preScript | Approve-CMOrchestrationGroupScript -Comment "Approve"
 
@@ -32,10 +32,10 @@ Approve-CMOrchestrationGroupScript -ScriptGuid $PreScript.ScriptGuid
 
 #### Deny-CMOrchestrationGroupScript
 
-This cmdlet would help user to deny orchestration group script.
+Use this cmdlet to deny an orchestration group script. For more information, see [About orchestration groups in Configuration Manager](../../../../../sum/deploy-use/orchestration-groups.md).
 
 ```powershell
-$referenceOG = Get-CMOrchestrationGroup -Name $Script:OGName
+$referenceOG = Get-CMOrchestrationGroup -Name "Orchestratrion group 1"
 $preScript = $referenceOG | Get-CMOrchestrationGroupScript -ScriptType Pre
 $preScript | Deny-CMOrchestrationGroupScript -Comment "Deny"
 
@@ -44,16 +44,16 @@ Deny-CMOrchestrationGroupScript -ScriptGuid $PreScript.ScriptGuid -Comment "Deny
 
 #### Get-CMOrchestrationGroupScript
 
-This cmdlet would help user to get orchestration group script from specified orchestration group.
+Use this cmdlet to get a script from the specified orchestration group. For more information, see [About orchestration groups in Configuration Manager](../../../../../sum/deploy-use/orchestration-groups.md).
 
 ```powershell
-$referenceOG = Get-CMOrchestrationGroup -Name $Script:OGName
+$referenceOG = Get-CMOrchestrationGroup -Name "Orchestratrion group 1"
 $preScript = $referenceOG | Get-CMOrchestrationGroupScript -ScriptType Pre
 ```
 
 #### Get-CMTrustedRootCertificationAuthority
 
-This cmdlet would help user to get the certificates for trusted root certification authorities(CAs).
+Use this cmdlet to get the certificates for trusted root certification authorities from the site.
 
 ```powershell
 $ci =Get-CMTrustedRootCertificationAuthority
@@ -62,7 +62,7 @@ $ci =Get-CMTrustedRootCertificationAuthority -ViewDetail
 
 #### New-CMAADClientApplication
 
-This cmdlet would help user to specify application details and sign in with Azure Active Directory admin credentials to create client application in the Azure Active Directory.
+Use this cmdlet to create a client app registration in Azure Active Directory (Azure AD). When you run this cmdlet, it will prompt you to sign in to your tenant. For more information on this app registration, see [Manually register Azure AD apps for the CMG](../../../../clients/manage/cmg/manually-register-azure-ad-apps.md).
 
 ```powershell
 $serverApp = New-CMAADServerApplication -AppName $appName
@@ -71,7 +71,7 @@ New-CMAADClientApplication -AppName $name -InputObject $serverApp
 
 #### New-CMAADServerApplication
 
-This cmdlet would help user to specify application details and sign in with Azure Active Directory admin credentials to create server application in the Azure Active Directory.
+Use this cmdlet to create a server app registration in Azure AD. When you run this cmdlet, it will prompt you to sign in to your tenant. For more information on this app registration, see [Manually register Azure AD apps for the CMG](../../../../clients/manage/cmg/manually-register-azure-ad-apps.md).
 
 ```powershell
 New-CMAADServerApplication -AppName $appName
@@ -81,44 +81,62 @@ New-CMAADServerApplication -AppName $appName
 
 #### Add-CMManagementPoint
 
+For more information, see [Add-CMManagementPoint](/powershell/module/configurationmanager/Add-CMManagementPoint).
+
 **Non-breaking changes**
 
-Fixed the function to make the ClientConnectionTypes.InternetAndIntranet as default value when enable cloud gateway to align with UI.
+When you use this cmdlet to enable communication with the cloud management gateway, it now by default configures the management point to support both internet and intranet clients.
 
 #### Get-CMObjectSecurityScope
 
+For more information, see [Get-CMObjectSecurityScope](/powershell/module/configurationmanager/Get-CMObjectSecurityScope).
+
 **Non-breaking changes**
 
-Fixed the function to allow user to get the security scope of a specified folder object.
+You can now use this cmdlet to get the security scope of a specified folder object.
 
 #### New-CMCloudManagementGateway
 
+For more information, see [New-CMCloudManagementGateway](/powershell/module/configurationmanager/New-CMCloudManagementGateway).
+
 **Non-breaking changes**
 
-Added parameter “VMSSVMSize” and “Version” to support creating a CMG using a Scale Set.
+Added parameters **VMSSVMSize** and **Version** to support creating a cloud management gateway (CMG) using a virtual machine scale set.
 
 #### New-CMComplianceRuleRegistryKeyPermission
 
+For more information, see [New-CMComplianceRuleRegistryKeyPermission](/powershell/module/configurationmanager/New-CMComplianceRuleRegistryKeyPermission).
+
 **Non-breaking changes**
 
-Fixed an issue in OperandDataType property when create rule.
+Fixed an issue in **OperandDataType** property when creating a rule.
 
 #### Set-CMClientSettingComplianceSetting
 
+For more information, see [Set-CMClientSettingComplianceSetting](/powershell/module/configurationmanager/Set-CMClientSettingComplianceSetting).
+
 **Non-breaking changes**
 
-Added new parameter “ScriptExecutionTimeoutSecs” to allow user to extend the DCM script execution timeout value.
+Added a new parameter **ScriptExecutionTimeoutSecs** to extend the script execution timeout value.
 
 #### Set-CMClientSettingComputerRestart
 
+For more information, see [Set-CMClientSettingComputerRestart](/powershell/module/configurationmanager/Set-CMClientSettingComputerRestart).
+
 **Non-breaking changes**
 
-Extended the validation range of the parameter “CountdownMins” and “RebootLogoffNotificationCountdownMins” to align with UI.
-Added new parameter “CountdownIntervalMins” and “ServerRebootLowRight” to align with UI. 
-Fixed an property name issue for the parameter “NoRebootEnforcement”.
+- Extended the validation range of the parameters **CountdownMins** and **RebootLogoffNotificationCountdownMins** to align with the console.
+- Added new parameters **CountdownIntervalMins** and **ServerRebootLowRight** to align with the console.
+- Fixed a property name issue for the parameter **NoRebootEnforcement**.
 
-### Common Fix 
+### Module changes
 
-Added folder support for Automatic  Deployment Rule in cmdlets:
+The following folder-related cmdlets now support automatic deployment rules:
 
-New-CMFolder, Get-CMFolder, Set-CMFolder, Remove-CMFolder, Move-CMObject, Add-CMObjectSecurityScope and Remove-CMObjectSecurityScope.
+- [Get-CMFolder](/powershell/module/configurationmanager/get-cmfolder)
+- [New-CMFolder](/powershell/module/configurationmanager/new-cmfolder)
+- [Remove-CMFolder](/powershell/module/configurationmanager/remove-cmfolder)
+- [Set-CMFolder](/powershell/module/configurationmanager/set-cmfolder)
+- [Move-CMObject](/powershell/module/configurationmanager/move-cmobject)
+- [Add-CMObjectSecurityScope](/powershell/module/configurationmanager/Add-CMObjectSecurityScope)
+- [Remove-CMObjectSecurityScope](/powershell/module/configurationmanager/Remove-CMObjectSecurityScope)

memdocs/configmgr/core/get-started/2022/technical-preview-2205.md

@@ -30,6 +30,7 @@ The following sections describe the new features to try out in this version:
 [!INCLUDE [13351390](includes/2205/13351390.md)]
 [!INCLUDE [14059872](includes/2205/14059872.md)]
 [!INCLUDE [14120481](includes/2205/14120481.md)]
+[!INCLUDE [14046376](includes/2205/14046376.md)]
 
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