Update 14917369.md

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Author: Banreet

memdocs/configmgr/core/get-started/2022/includes/2208/14917369.md

@@ -4,14 +4,14 @@ ms.author: banreetkaur
 ms.prod: configuration-manager
 ms.technology: configmgr-core
 ms.topic: include
-ms.date: 29/08/2022
+ms.date: 08/29/2022
 ms.localizationpriority: medium
 ---
 
-## <a name="bkmk_improvements-to-the-dark-theme"></a> Dark theme is now extended to additional dashboards
+## <a name="bkmk_improvements-to-the-dark-theme"></a> Dark theme is now extended to more dashboards
 
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-In this release we've extended the dark theme to additional dashboards which previously did not display the dark theme correctly. For example, the O365 Updates Dashboard, PCM Dashboard, and Health Attestation dashboard will now display according to the dark theme, when it is enabled.
+In this release we've extended the dark theme to more dashboards, which previously didn't display the dark theme correctly. For example, the O365 Updates Dashboard, PCM Dashboard, and Health Attestation dashboard will now display according to the dark theme, when it's enabled.
 
 Enable this pre-release feature to experience the dark theme. For more information, see [Dark theme for the console.](../../../../../core/servers/manage/admin-console.md)