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Author: ErikjeMS

windows-365/business/device-management.md

@@ -48,7 +48,7 @@ You can sign in to the [Microsoft 365 admin center](https://admin.microsoft.com)
 
 ## Intune
 
-If the organization and users are properly licensed, Cloud PCs can be enrolled to Intune using the same procedure for [enrolling Windows 10 machines to Intune](/mem/intune/user-help/enroll-windows-10-device).
+If the organization and users are properly licensed, Cloud PCs can be enrolled in Intune. In this case, use the same procedure for [enrolling Windows 10 machines in Intune](/mem/intune/user-help/enroll-windows-10-device).
 
 ## Microsoft Graph
 

windows-365/business/get-started-windows-365-business.md

@@ -43,7 +43,7 @@ This article is for people who plan to buy and set up Windows 365 Business for t
 
 There are no licensing prerequisites to set up Windows 365 Business.
 
-For the best onboarding experience, please refer to the [setup troubleshooting guide](troubleshoot-windows-365-business.md) to make sure your environment preferences are optimized for Windows 365 Business. For example, the guide can help you if you are using multifactor authentication, Conditional Access policies, or Intune in your environment.
+For the best onboarding experience, refer to the [setup troubleshooting guide](troubleshoot-windows-365-business.md). This article can help make sure you optimize your environment preferences for Windows 365 Business. For example, the guide can help you if you are using multi-factor authentication, Conditional Access policies, or Intune in your environment.
 
 ## Buy subscriptions
 
@@ -62,7 +62,7 @@ If you don't already have a Microsoft 365 subscription, you can buy your Windows
 2. On the next page, select the subscription you want to purchase, and then select **Buy now**.
 3. On the **Thank you for choosing Windows 365 Business** page, follow the steps to set up your account.
 4. In **step 5 - Confirmation details**, if you are ready to assign licenses to users, select **Get started** to go to your [Windows 365 home page](https://windows365.microsoft.com).
-5. On the Windows 365 home page, in the **Quick actions** section, select **Manage your organization**. This takes you to the Microsoft 365 admin center where you can assign licenses to users.
+5. On the Windows 365 home page, in the **Quick actions** section, select **Manage your organization**. This link takes you to the Microsoft 365 admin center where you can assign licenses to users.
 
 Users without the Global or Billing admin roles can use self-service purchase to buy a subscription for Windows 365 Business directly from the [Windows 365 Business products site](https://www.microsoft.com/windows-365/business?rtc=1). A user who buys a subscription this way is granted a limited view of the [Microsoft 365 admin center](https://go.microsoft.com/fwlink/p/?linkid=2024339), where they can assign licenses for that subscription to other users in their organization. Assigning a license to another user automatically creates a Windows 365 Business Cloud PC for them, which can be accessed from the [Windows 365 home page](https://windows365.microsoft.com/).
 
@@ -73,7 +73,12 @@ To learn more about self-service purchase, see the [Self-service purchase FAQ](/
 
 ### Buy a subscription through the Microsoft admin center
 
-If you already have a Microsoft 365 tenant and are a Global or Billing admin, you can use the Microsoft 365 admin center to buy a Windows 365 Business subscription for your organization.
+You can use the Microsoft 365 admin center to buy a Windows 365 Business subscription for your organization if you:
+
+- Have a Microsoft 365 tenant.
+- Are a Global or Billing admin.
+
+If you meet both these requirements, follow these steps:
 
 1. In the Microsoft admin center, go to the **Billing > Purchase services** page.
 2. On the **Purchase services** page, search for **Windows 365 Business**. When you find it, select **Details**.

windows-365/business/get-users-started.md

@@ -37,7 +37,7 @@ After licenses are assigned, let your users know that there are two different wa
 
 ## Windows 365 home page
 
-Users can navigate to **https://windows365.microsoft.com** to access their Cloud PCs.
+Users can navigate to [https://windows365.microsoft.com](https://windows365.microsoft.com) to access their Cloud PCs.
 
 On their Windows 365 home page, users see the Cloud PCs they have access to in the **Your Cloud PCs** section.
 
@@ -50,13 +50,13 @@ Users can select **Open in browser** to open their Cloud PC.
 
 ### User actions
 
-While on the Windows 365 home page, users can perform actions on their Cloud PCs by selecting the gear icon on a Cloud PC card.
+While on the Windows 365 home page, users can take actions on their Cloud PCs. To do so, they can select the gear icon on a Cloud PC card.
 
 ![Card menu.](./media/get-started-windows-365-business/cloud-pc-gear.png)
 
 - **Restart**: Restarts the Cloud PC.
 
-- **Reset**:  Reset does the following:
+- **Reset**:
   - Reinstalls Windows (with the option to choose between Windows 11 and Windows 10).
   - Removes your personal files.
   - Removes any changes you made to settings.
@@ -74,13 +74,13 @@ While on the Windows 365 home page, users can perform actions on their Cloud PCs
     |No issues detected |None of the checks ran discovered an issue with the Cloud PC. |
     |Issues resolved |An issue was detected and fixed. |
     |Can’t connect to Cloud PC. We’re working to fix it, try again later. |A Microsoft service required for connectivity is unavailable. Try connecting again later. |
-    |We couldn’t fix issues with your Cloud PC. Contact your administrator. |An issue was detected but it was unable to be fixed. This could be due to an ongoing Windows update or another issue. If this error persists for an extended period of time the Cloud PC may need to be reset. |
+    |We couldn’t fix issues with your Cloud PC. Contact your administrator. |An issue was detected but it was unable to be fixed. This issue could be caused by an ongoing Windows update or another issue. If this error persists for an extended period of time, the Cloud PC may need to be reset. |
 
 - **System Information**: Displays information about the Cloud PC specification.
 
 ## Remote Desktop
 
-The Microsoft Remote Desktop app lets users access and control a remote PC, including a Cloud PC. Windows 365 users can download and install the Remote Desktop client they need from the Windows 365 home page.
+The Microsoft Remote Desktop app lets users access and control a remote PC, including a Cloud PC. Windows 365 users can download and install the Remote Desktop client from the Windows 365 home page.
 
 ### Install the Microsoft Remote Desktop app