minor rewording

Author: Stephanie-Rosenzweig

learn-pr/device-partner-university/deploy-windows/includes/1-introduction.md

@@ -2,10 +2,9 @@ With planning and preparation in place, you can successfully deploy Windows 11 a
 
 During [the Plan phase](/training/modules/plan-windows/), you assessed organizational readiness by defining success criteria, identifying risks, and creating key deliverables. In [the Prepare phase](/training/modules/prepare-windows/), you validated readiness and addressed gaps using recommended tools, reports, and deliverables.
 
-This module covers the Deploy phase—it outlines the tasks and deliverables required to deploy Windows 11 using a phased, or ring-based, approach, including pilot and broad deployments.
+This module covers the Deploy phase—it outlines the tasks and deliverables required to deploy Windows 11 using a phased, or ring-based, approach, including pilot and broad deployments. Deliverables should be in a format that’s easy to share and collaboratively edit throughout the life of the project.
 
-Keep in mind that, in practice, the six areas we’ll address—operations, applications, infrastructure, configurations, devices, and users—often require simultaneous or overlapping attention. Deliverables should be in a format that’s easy to share and collaboratively edit throughout the life of the project.
-Also keep in mind that the size and complexity of your organization will influence your overall approach.
+Keep in mind that, in practice, the six areas we’ll address—operations, applications, infrastructure, configurations, devices, and users—often require simultaneous or overlapping attention. Also keep in mind that the size and complexity of your organization will influence your overall approach.
 
 To start, let’s establish some of the terminology we use throughout this module.