Address reviewer feedback

Author: Orin-Thomas

learn-pr/advocates/intro-azure-arc-enabled-vmware-vsphere/includes/1-azure-arc-enabled-vmware.md

@@ -13,8 +13,6 @@ To connect your VMware vCenter Server to Azure Arc, you need to deploy the Azure
 
 vSphere resources are automatically discovered when you connect a VMware vCenter Server to Azure. After initial discovery, regular synchronization between the vCenter Server and Azure ensures that this inventory data is kept up-to-date.
 
-[![Diagram showing Arc enabled VMware vSphere architecture.](../media/arc-enabled-vmware-architecture.png)](../media/arc-enabled-vmware-architecture-big.png#lightbox)
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 Guest OS-based capabilities are provided by enabling guest management. Guest management involves installing the Arc agent on the VMs running in the VMware environment. Once you enable guest management, you can deploy VM extensions to extend the Azure management capabilities. For example, by enabling guest management, you can perform virtual hardware operations such as VM resizing, adding and deleting disks, and VM restarts.
 
 Arc-enabled VMware vSphere works with vCenter Server versions 7 and 8. You can onboard multiple vCenters using a single Azure Arc resource bridge as long as the total number of VMs managed across all onboarded systems doesn't exceed 9500. 

learn-pr/advocates/intro-azure-arc-enabled-vmware-vsphere/includes/2-configure-arc-enabled-vmware.md

@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 Connecting your VMware vCenter Server instance to Azure Arc enables you to start using the Azure Arc-enabled VMware vSphere features. You make this connection with a helper script that deploys the Azure Arc resource bridge virtual appliance in your vCenter environment. Once deployed, the script then installs a VMware cluster extension to provide a continuous connection between vCenter Server and Azure Arc.
 
-Prior to performing these steps, you need access to an Microsoft Entra account that has the Owner, Contributor, or Azure Arc VMware Private Clouds Onboarding role to a resource group in the target subscription. The vCenter server you want to connect also needs to meet the following requirements:
+Prior to performing these steps, you need access to a Microsoft Entra account that has the Owner, Contributor, or Azure Arc VMware Private Clouds Onboarding role to a resource group in the target subscription. The vCenter server you want to connect also needs to meet the following requirements:
 
 - vCenter Server version 7 or 8.
 - A virtual network that can provide internet access, directly or through a proxy. It must also be possible for VMs on this network to communicate with the vCenter server on TCP port (usually 443).
@@ -117,7 +117,7 @@ To make resources in your Azure VMware Solution private cloud enabled for Azure,
 
 The enable action starts a deployment and creates a resource in Azure, creating representative objects in Azure for your VMware vSphere resources. It allows you to manage who can access those resources through Role-based access control granularly.
 
-## Roles and Permissions
+## Roles and permissions
 
 You assign permissions to resources in Azure by adding security principals to role based access control roles. The Built-in Roles for Azure Arc-enabled VMware vSphere include
 

learn-pr/advocates/intro-azure-arc-enabled-vmware-vsphere/includes/3-azure-arc-enabled-vmware-vm-operations.md

@@ -32,8 +32,6 @@ When the Azure Connected Machine agent is installed on vCenter-managed VMs, Admi
 - Monitor operating system performance and discover application components to monitor processes and dependencies with other resources using VM insights.
 - Collect other log data, such as performance data and events, from the operating system or workloads running on the machine with the Azure Monitor Agent. 
 
-[![Diagram of Azure Connected Machine agent architecture.](../media/azure-connected-machine-agent.png)](../media/azure-connected-machine-agent-big.png#lightbox)
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 The Azure Connected Machine agent is updated regularly to address bug fixes, stability enhancements, and new functionality. Azure Advisor identifies resources that aren't using the latest version of the machine agent and recommends that you upgrade to the latest version. It notifies you when you select the Azure Arc-enabled server by presenting a banner on the Overview page, or when you access Advisor through the Azure portal.
 
 The Azure Connected Machine agent for Windows and Linux can be upgraded to the latest release manually or automatically, depending on your requirements. Installing, upgrading, or uninstalling the Azure Connected Machine Agent doesn't require you to restart your server.