updated pen edition

Author: Stephanie-Rosenzweig

learn-pr/device-partner-university/maximize-surface/includes/1-introduction.md

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 Work moves fast, and you need tools that help you stay productive, flexible, and focused. Microsoft 365 Copilot on your Surface device helps you accomplish more in less time—whether you’re writing, analyzing data, creating presentations, or collaborating with your team.
 
-Imagine this: You have an important meeting coming up, and you need a polished presentation fast. You were up late preparing, so your hands are already cramping from typing. You’ve also realized that using more natural input methods helps you stay focused and think more clearly. With your Surface device, you can use the Surface Slim Pen to annotate ideas, the Studio Microphone with Voice Clarity technology to dictate content, and Copilot to quickly generate, summarize, and refine your slides.
+Imagine this: You have an important meeting coming up, and you need a polished presentation fast. You were up late preparing, so your hands are already cramping from typing. You’ve also realized that using more natural input methods helps you stay focused and think more clearly. With your Surface device, you can use the Surface Slim Pen 2nd Edition to annotate ideas, the Studio Microphone with Voice Clarity technology to dictate content, and Copilot to quickly generate, summarize, and refine your slides.
 
 ![A photograph of a business professional standing at their desk with their Surface device in front of a large window.](../media/worker.png)

learn-pr/device-partner-university/maximize-surface/includes/2-surface-copilot.md

@@ -11,15 +11,15 @@ Surface devices enhance this experience with flexible input methods: Pen, touch,
 
 Surface features make Copilot more intuitive and productive:
 
-- Surface Slim Pen: Handwrite notes or annotate slides directly; Copilot can interpret and transform them into polished content.
+- Surface Slim Pen 2nd Edition: Handwrite notes or annotate slides directly; Copilot can interpret and transform them into polished content.
 - PixelSense touchscreen: Highlight, rearrange, or select content seamlessly while Copilot generates outputs.
 - Studio Microphone: Dictate content hands-free or give Copilot voice commands. Voice Clarity technology helps make your voice clear and more easily heard.
-- High-resolution display: Compare drafts, slides, or notes side by side.
+- PixelSense display: Compare drafts, slides, or notes side by side.
 
 > [!TIP]
 > On your Surface device, you can press Win + H to start dictation. Your spoken words are converted into text in apps like Word, PowerPoint, OneNote, or directly into Copilot’s prompt box.
 
-![A photograph of a business professional uses the Surface Slim Pen on a Surface device at a desk.](../media/write.jpg)
+![A photograph of a business professional uses the Surface Slim Pen 2nd Edition on a Surface device at a desk.](../media/write.jpg)
 
 And Copilot helps enhance each Microsoft 365 app:
 
@@ -28,7 +28,7 @@ And Copilot helps enhance each Microsoft 365 app:
 - Excel: Analyze data, extract insights, and generate charts.
 - OneNote: Organize notes, create project outlines, and collaborate with others.
 
-*Reflection: Think about tasks where typing slows you down. How could using Surface Studio Pen and voice input with the Studio Microphone speed up your workflow and reduce fatigue?*
+*Reflection: Think about tasks where typing slows you down. How could using Surface Slim Pen 2nd Edition and voice input with the Studio Microphone speed up your workflow and reduce fatigue?*
 
 > [!NOTE]
 > Customers using Surface with Copilot see an average of 5.5 hours of higher productivity per device and benefit from more efficient use of AI-driven workflows.*

learn-pr/device-partner-university/maximize-surface/includes/3-create-presentation.md

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-You have an upcoming leadership meeting, and you need to create a professional presentation quickly. Typing is slowing you down, so you want to use your Surface Slim Pen and Studio Microphone to dictate ideas and annotate content while Copilot helps you refine slides.
+You have an upcoming leadership meeting, and you need to create a professional presentation quickly. Typing is slowing you down, so you want to use your Surface Slim Pen 2nd Edition and Studio Microphone to dictate ideas and annotate content while Copilot helps you refine slides.
 
 ### Step 1: Open PowerPoint and prepare Copilot
 1. Sign in to your Microsoft 365 account on your Surface.
 2. Open PowerPoint and create a new presentation.
 3. Launch Copilot:
    - Home Ribbon → Copilot sidebar
 
-![A photograph of a business professional uses the Surface Slim Pen on a Surface device while sitting on a couch.](../media/couch.jpg)
+![A photograph of a business professional uses the Surface Slim Pen 2nd Edition on a Surface device while sitting on a couch.](../media/couch.jpg)
 
 ### Step 2: Dictate or write your main points
 1. Use the Studio Microphone to dictate your slide content.
-2. For ideas you want to refine or organize visually, write key points with the Surface Slim Pen on the first slide.
+2. For ideas you want to refine or organize visually, write key points with the Surface Slim Pen 2nd Edition on the first slide.
 
 ### Step 3: Use Copilot to generate slides
 1. Prompt Copilot with natural language:
 *"Create a five-slide presentation for our leadership meeting. Include objectives, key updates, and next steps."*
 2. Copilot generates slides based on your prompts.
 
-### Step 4: Annotate and refine slides with Surface Slim Pen
+### Step 4: Annotate and refine slides with Surface Slim Pen 2nd Edition
 1. Use the Pen to highlight text or sections.
 2. Ask Copilot to rewrite highlighted content for clarity, tone, or conciseness.
 3. Repeat until slides match your intended message.
 
 ### Step 5: Use touch to rearrange content
-- Drag slides or text boxes with your finger or Surface Slim Pen to adjust flow.
+- Drag slides or text boxes with your finger or Surface Slim Pen 2nd Edition to adjust flow.
 - Highlight sections to have Copilot summarize or create bullet points.
 
 ### Step 6: Add finishing touches
@@ -32,4 +32,4 @@ You have an upcoming leadership meeting, and you need to create a professional p
 *“Summarize slide 3 in a single bullet point.”*
 2. Review slides, taking advantage of the high-resolution display to get a clear idea of how they'll present.
 
-***Reflection:** Which combination of Surface Slim Pen, and Studio Microphone felt most natural for your workflow? How much faster could you complete a presentation compared to typing everything?*
+***Reflection:** Which combination of Surface Slim Pen 2nd Edition, and Studio Microphone felt most natural for your workflow? How much faster could you complete a presentation compared to typing everything?*

learn-pr/device-partner-university/maximize-surface/includes/5-onenote-copilot.md

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-Your team is brainstorming a project plan. Notes are scattered across sticky notes, emails, and rough drafts. You want to organize them efficiently using Copilot, Surface Slim Pen, and Studio Microphone.
+Your team is brainstorming a project plan. Notes are scattered across sticky notes, emails, and rough drafts. You want to organize them efficiently using Copilot, Surface Slim Pen 2nd Edition, and Studio Microphone.
 
 Before you begin, bring all your rough materials together so Copilot has the full picture.
 
 ### Step 1: Gather notes
 - **Compile your notes:** Gather emails, meeting minutes, screenshots, sticky notes, and rough drafts you’ve collected across devices. You can paste them directly into OneNote or attach them using the Insert menu.
-- **Add handwritten ideas:** Use your Surface Slim Pen to write down reminders, sketch connections, or add questions in the margins. Copilot can read and interpret your handwriting as easily as typed notes.
+- **Add handwritten ideas:** Use your Surface Slim Pen 2nd Edition to write down reminders, sketch connections, or add questions in the margins. Copilot can read and interpret your handwriting as easily as typed notes.
 - **Capture dictated thoughts:** If you think faster than you type, use your Surface Studio Microphone to dictate quick thoughts right into OneNote. Voice Clarity helps ensure your speech is transcribed accurately for Copilot to use later.
 
 ### Step 2: Open OneNote and launch Copilot
@@ -14,13 +14,13 @@ Before you begin, bring all your rough materials together so Copilot has the ful
 4. Begin interacting:
    - **Type your prompt**,  
    - **Use your voice** with the Studio Microphones for hands-free input, or  
-   - **Write a prompt with the Slim Pen**, which OneNote converts to text automatically.
+   - **Write a prompt with the Slim Pen 2nd Edition**, which OneNote converts to text automatically.
 5. Invite collaborators: Share the OneNote page or notebook with teammates so they can coedit in real time as you begin shaping content.
 
 > [!TIP]
 > Surface supports fluid input switching—begin writing with the pen, then jump to voice or touch without losing your flow.
 
-![A photograph of a business professional is seated at their desk using a Surface Slim Pen to work in OneNote on their Surface device.](../media/onenote.jpg)
+![A photograph of a business professional is seated at their desk using a Surface Slim Pen 2nd Edition to work in OneNote on their Surface device.](../media/onenote.jpg)
 
 ### Step 3: Generate a structured outline
 1. Enter a prompt, such as:  
@@ -31,7 +31,7 @@ Before you begin, bring all your rough materials together so Copilot has the ful
    - Clean headings and subheadings  
    - A reorganized, easy-to-read structure
 3. Review Copilot’s outline and:
-   - Use the Slim Pen to circle areas to keep or cross out items you want removed.
+   - Use the Surface Slim Pen 2nd Edition to circle areas to keep or cross out items you want removed.
    - Add margin notes indicating what Copilot should adjust.
    - Tap and drag sections using touch to reorder items.
 
@@ -43,7 +43,7 @@ Before you begin, bring all your rough materials together so Copilot has the ful
    - Suggest due dates  
    - Create a visual or bulleted timeline  
    - Convert scattered items into actionable steps
-3. Use touch or Slim Pen to adjust:
+3. Use touch or Surface Slim Pen 2nd Edition to adjust:
    - Reassign tasks  
    - Add missing deadlines  
    - Mark items as high-priority
@@ -73,14 +73,14 @@ Use Copilot to polish your outline into a ready-to-share artifact.
 > [!TIP]
 > Before entering the call, open Device settings and enable Windows Studio Effects, such as:
    - Automatic framing to stay centered even if you move.
-  - Background blur to remove visual distractions.
+   - Background blur to remove visual distractions.
    - Voice focus / noise suppression to eliminate typing, room noise, or echo.
 
 2. Begin the collaborative review
 
    Once in the meeting, greet the team and briefly set expectations for the review session (for example, "We’ll walk through the outline and timeline and confirm ownership for each task").
 
-   Make sure your Surface Slim Pen and touch controls are ready if you want to annotate the page live during the discussion.
+   Make sure your Surface Slim Pen 2nd Edition and touch controls are ready if you want to annotate the page live during the discussion.
 
 ![A photograph of a business professional greets teammates on a Microsoft Teams call by waving a hand at their Surface device.](../media/teams.jpg)
 
@@ -92,7 +92,7 @@ Use Copilot to polish your outline into a ready-to-share artifact.
 
 4. Review and edit content together
 
-   Walk through each section of the outline, pausing to gather input or confirm decisions. Make live edits using touch or the Surface Slim Pen so everyone can see changes in real time. Allow collaborators to add comments or update tasks simultaneously in OneNote if coauthoring is enabled.
+   Walk through each section of the outline, pausing to gather input or confirm decisions. Make live edits using touch or the Surface Slim Pen 2nd Edition so everyone can see changes in real time. Allow collaborators to add comments or update tasks simultaneously in OneNote if coauthoring is enabled.
 
 5. Finalize outcomes
 

learn-pr/device-partner-university/maximize-surface/includes/6-knowledge-check.json

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 "correct_choice": "Streamlined productivity with multimodal inputs",
 "explanations": {
 "Faster typing": "Incorrect. Copilot doesn't directly increase typing speed but it can enhance productivity using AI and multimodal input.",
-"Streamlined productivity with multimodal inputs": "Correct. Copilot on Surface devices improves workflow by integrating Surface Slim Pen, touch, and voice input using Studio Microphone for efficiency.",
+"Streamlined productivity with multimodal inputs": "Correct. Copilot on Surface devices improves workflow by integrating Surface Slim Pen 2nd Edition, touch, and voice input using Studio Microphone for efficiency.",
 "More storage space": "Incorrect. Copilot doesn't affect device storage.",
 "Improved battery life": "Incorrect. Battery performance is unrelated to Copilot's AI productivity features."
 }
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 "question": "What is a recommended way to interact with Copilot efficiently?",
 "choices": [
 "Use only the keyboard",
-"Combine Surface Slim Pen, touch, and voice commands using Studio Microphone",
+"Combine Surface Slim Pen 2nd Edition, touch, and voice commands using Studio Microphone",
 "Dictate long paragraphs without revision",
 "Only click through menus"
 ],
-"correct_choice": "Combine Surface Slim Pen, touch, and voice commands using Studio Microphone",
+"correct_choice": "Combine Surface Slim Pen 2nd Edition, touch, and voice commands using Studio Microphone",
 "explanations": {
 "Use only the keyboard": "Incorrect. Limiting input to the keyboard doesn't take advantage of multimodal efficiency.",
 "Combine Pen, touch, and voice commands": "Correct. Using multiple input methods allows for faster, more intuitive interaction with Copilot.",