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Author: habibaum

articles/migrate/review-web-app-assessment.md

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 This article describes how to review the insights from a web app assessment for modernization to [Azure Kubernetes Service (AKS)](/azure/aks/intro-kubernetes) or Azure App Service using Azure Migrate. Creating an assessment for your web apps provides the recommended targets for them and key insights such as app-readiness, target right-sizing, and cost to host, and run these apps month over month.
 
-In this article, you'll learn how to: 
+In this article, you learn how to: 
 
 - Get the recommended modernization path across the preferred targets based on app-readiness and cost. 
 - Get the modernization paths to each Azure target for all selected web apps. 
@@ -43,8 +43,8 @@ To view an assessment, follow these steps:
 
     :::image type="content" source="./media/review-web-app-assessment/overview.png" alt-text="Screenshot displays overview of the assessment." lightbox="./media/review-web-app-assessment/overview.png":::
 
-   1. **Assessed workloads**: Surfaces the collection of workloads assessed. Click view details to shows the distribution across web server and web app types. 
-   1. **Recommended path**: It provides the most optimal path for migrating web apps across Azure targets, based on your preferred targets, cloud readiness and cost. It captures the readiness distribution, migration strategy (Replatform vs Rehost) and monthly cost estimate for running the web apps across the targets.
+   1. **Assessed workloads**: Surfaces the collection of workloads assessed. Select view details to show the distribution across web server and web app types. 
+   1. **Recommended path**: It provides the most optimal path for migrating web apps across Azure targets, based on your preferred targets, cloud readiness, and cost. It captures the readiness distribution, migration strategy (Replatform vs Rehost), and monthly cost estimate for running the web apps across the targets.
    1. **Target-specific migration path**: This section provides the path for migrating all web apps to a specific target. It allows you to see the readiness warnings or issues for migrating the apps to that target and captures the monthly cost estimate.
 
 1. The web apps can take one of the following readiness states: 
@@ -53,7 +53,7 @@ To view an assessment, follow these steps:
    |----------|--------|
    | Ready  | The web app is ready to be migrated.   |
    | Ready with conditions  | The web app needs minor changes to be ready for migration.  |
-   | Not ready  | The web app needs major/breaking changes to be ready for migration.  |
+   | Not ready  | The web app needs to major/breaking changes to be ready for migration.  |
    | Unknown  | The web app discovery data was either incomplete or corrupt to calculate readiness. |
 
     :::image type="content" source="./media/review-web-app-assessment/readiness.png" alt-text="Screenshot displays readiness for the web app for each Azure target." lightbox="./media/review-web-app-assessment/readiness.png":::
@@ -62,31 +62,31 @@ To view an assessment, follow these steps:
 
     :::image type="content" source="./media/review-web-app-assessment/recommended-path-view-details.png" alt-text="Screenshot displays recommended path or view details for the assessment." lightbox="./media/review-web-app-assessment/recommended-path-view-details.png":::
 
-1. This screen displays the distribution of the web apps across the Azure targets. It also provides other details such as the number of target instances (App Service instance, AKS clusters), migration strategy and readiness distribution. Select a line item to drill down further. 
+1. This screen displays the distribution of the web apps across the Azure targets. It also provides other details such as the number of target instances (App Service instance, AKS clusters), migration strategy, and readiness distribution. Select a line item to drill down further. 
 
     :::image type="content" source="./media/review-web-app-assessment/app-service-container.png" alt-text="Screenshot displays app service container details for the web apps." lightbox="./media/review-web-app-assessment/app-service-container.png":::
 
 1. **App Service Container**: The target drill down shows granular details for the web apps recommended to this target. 
 
     1. Top level insights include the cost distribution by App Service Plan SKUs and top migration issues or warnings. 
     1. The report also shows how the web apps are packed into App Service plans. Selecting the plan brings up the plan details, rightsized based on the assessed web apps.
-    1. Selecting the readiness status shows the migration issues or warnings, their root causes and recommended remediation steps.
+    1. Selecting the readiness status shows the migration issues or warnings, their root causes, and recommended remediation steps.
 
     :::image type="content" source="./media/review-web-app-assessment/web-apps-to-app-service-code.png" alt-text="Screenshot displays the web apps to app service code list." lightbox="./media/review-web-app-assessment/web-apps-to-app-service-code.png":::
 
 1. Selecting a web app from the target drill‑downs opens the web app drill‑down. On the **Summary** tab, you can view discovered metadata such as protocols, connection strings, application directories, and the tags assigned to the workload.
 
     :::image type="content" source="./media/review-web-app-assessment/summary-of-web-app.png" alt-text="Screenshot displays the summary of web apps." lightbox="./media/review-web-app-assessment/summary-of-web-app.png":::
 
-1. On the **Readiness** tab, you can see the readiness for this web app for each Azure target, the migration issues or warnings and the recommended Azure target.
+1. On the **Readiness** tab, you can see the readiness for this web app for each Azure target, the migration issues, or warnings and the recommended Azure target.
 
     :::image type="content" source="./media/review-web-app-assessment/default-web-site.png" alt-text="Screenshot displays the readiness for each deployment targets." lightbox="./media/review-web-app-assessment/default-web-site.png":::
 
 **Azure Kubernetes Service**: The target drill down shows granular details for the web apps recommended to this target.
     1. Top level insights include the cost distribution by Node SKUs and top migration issues or warnings. 
-    1. The report also shows how the web apps are packed into AKS node pools, the system pool and the number of nodes per pool.  
+    1. The report also shows how the web apps are packed into AKS node pools, the system pool, and the number of nodes per pool.  
     1. Selecting the cluster brings up the cluster details, right sized based on the assessed web apps. 
-1. Select a web app from the target drill downs opens the web app drill down. On the **Summary** tab, you can see discovered metadata such as protocols, connection strings, application directories and tags assigned to this workload.
+1. Select a web app from the target drill downs opens the web app drill-down. On the **Summary** tab, you can see discovered metadata such as protocols, connection strings, application directories, and tags assigned to this workload.
 
 1. Go back to the **Overview** page. Select the **Export** option to download an excel containing the assessment details.