Merge pull request #311744 from whhender/patch-102419

Fix grammar and clarity in auto-update documentation

Author: prmerger-automator[bot]

articles/data-factory/self-hosted-integration-runtime-auto-update.md

@@ -15,7 +15,11 @@ ms.date: 09/26/2024
 This article describes how to let self-hosted integration runtime autoupdate to the latest version and how Azure Data Factory (ADF) manages the versions of self-hosted integration runtime.
 
 ## How to check your self-hosted integration runtime version
-You can check the version either in your self-hosted integration runtime client or in the ADF portal:
+
+You can check the version either in your self-hosted integration runtime client or in the [ADF portal](https://adf.azure.com):
+
+> [!NOTE]
+> Make sure you're signed in with an account that has the required permissions for your Data Factory.
 
 :::image type="content" source="./media/self-hosted-integration-runtime-auto-update/self-hosted-integration-runtime-version-client.png" alt-text="Screenshot that shows the version in self-hosted integration runtime client.":::
 
@@ -24,7 +28,7 @@ You can check the version either in your self-hosted integration runtime client
 ## Self-hosted Integration Runtime Autoupdate
 Generally, when you install a self-hosted integration runtime in your local machine or an Azure Virtual Machine, you have two options to manage the version of self-hosted integration runtime: autoupdate or maintain manually. Typically, ADF releases one new version of self-hosted integration runtime every month, which includes new features released, bugs fixed, and enhancements. So we recommend users to update to the latest version.
 
-The most convenient way is to enable autoupdate when you create or edit self-hosted integration runtime. The self-hosted integration runtime is automatically update to newer version. You can also schedule the update at the most suitable time slot as you wish.
+The most convenient way is to enable autoupdate when you create or edit self-hosted integration runtime. The self-hosted integration runtime is automatically updated to newer version. You can also schedule the update at the most suitable time slot as you wish.
 
 :::image type="content" source="media/create-self-hosted-integration-runtime/shir-auto-update.png" alt-text="Enable auto-update":::
 
@@ -35,7 +39,7 @@ You can check the last update datetime in your self-hosted integration runtime c
 You can use this [PowerShell command](/powershell/module/az.datafactory/get-azdatafactoryv2integrationruntime#example-5--get-self-hosted-integration-runtime-with-detail-status) to get the autoupdate version. 
 
 > [!NOTE]
-> If you have multiple self-hosted integration runtime nodes, there is no downtime during auto-update. The auto-update happens in one node first while others are working on tasks. When the first node finishes the update, it will take over the remained tasks when other nodes are updating. If you only have one self-hosted integration runtime, then it has some downtime during the auto-update.
+> If you have multiple self-hosted integration runtime nodes, there is no downtime during auto-update. The auto-update happens in one node first while others are working on tasks. When the first node finishes the update, it will take over the remaineing tasks when other nodes are updating. If you only have one self-hosted integration runtime, then it has some downtime during the auto-update.
 
 ## Autoupdate version vs latest version
 To ensure the stability of self-hosted integration runtime, we release a new version each month and push an auto-update every three months, using a stable version from the preceding three months. So you may find that the autoupdated version is the previous version of the actual latest version. If you want to get the latest version, you can go to [download center](https://www.microsoft.com/download/details.aspx?id=39717) and do so manually. Additionally, **auto-update** to a new version is managed internally. You can't change it.