Discovery methods & discover using collector - Updates

Author: Molishv

articles/migrate/discovery-methods-modes.md

@@ -42,7 +42,7 @@ The appliance-based discovery method involves deploying a virtual appliance that
 ### Key features
 
 - Continuous collection of configuration data.
-- Real time colleciton of performance data.
+- Real time collection of performance data.
 - Supports discovering workloads such as SQL databases, webapps, PostgreSQL and MySQL.
 - Discover software inventory and enable dependency analysis.
 
@@ -65,14 +65,14 @@ Ensure that software inventory is enabled before initiating workload discovery.
 
 ## Collector-based discovery
 
-Azure Migrate collector enables offline discovery of IT esate. Using this lightweight tool, you can collect server configuration, performance, software inventory, and workload metadata without requiring connectivity to Azure during discovery. You can securely upload the collected data back to the Azure Migrate project you created. This approach is ideal for scenarios where quick discovery of your IT estate is required. It supports the discovery of VMware environments and physical or virtual servers in a hypervisor-agnostic approach.
+Azure Migrate collector enables offline discovery of IT estate. Using this lightweight tool, you can collect server configuration, performance, software inventory, and workload metadata without requiring connectivity to Azure during discovery. You can securely upload the collected data back to the Azure Migrate project you created. This approach is ideal for scenarios where quick discovery of your IT estate is required. It supports the discovery of VMware environments and physical or virtual servers in a hypervisor-agnostic approach.
 
 ### Key features
 
 - Captures a one-time snapshot of server configuration data.
 - Collects historical performance data.
 - Discovers installed software.
-- Discovers workloads such as SQL Server, web apps, PostgreSQL, and MySQL..
+- Discovers workloads such as SQL Server, web apps, PostgreSQL, and MySQL.
 
 ## Import-based discovery
 

articles/migrate/how-to-discover-using-collector.md

@@ -86,17 +86,16 @@ You can add up to 10 vCenter Servers per collector
 
 ### Provide guest and database credentials
 
-1.	Refer security best practices to set up least privileged accounts to set up least privileged accounts. 
-2.	Provide Windows & Linux guest accounts to collect data about installed software, database instances and web apps. Provide SQL credentials (Windows or SQL server authentication) to collect SQL suitability data. 
-3.	To verify if the guest credentials are valid, test them against few target servers. 
-4.	Enable the checkbox to validate credential. 
-5.	Select the vCenter and select up to 5 virtual machines from the drop down.
-6.	Select **validate**.   
-7.	If the credentials are not valid, fix the errors by following the recommendation step before triggering data collection. 
-8.	If the credentials are successfully validated, guest discovery of installed software, inventory of database instance on the machines will be successful. 
+1.	Provide Windows & Linux guest accounts to collect data about installed software, database instances and web apps. Provide SQL credentials (Windows or SQL server authentication) to collect SQL suitability data. 
+2.	To verify if the guest credentials are valid, test them against few target servers. 
+3.	Enable the checkbox to validate credential. 
+4.	Select the vCenter and select up to 5 virtual machines from the drop down.
+5.	Select **validate**.   
+6.	If the credentials are not valid, fix the errors by following the recommendation step before triggering data collection. 
+7.	If the credentials are successfully validated, guest discovery of installed software, inventory of database instance on the machines will be successful. 
 > [!NOTE]
 > - For the collection of data about installed software, web apps and for identifying SQL/PostgreSQL server instances, collector doesn’t need network line of sight to guest machines. The guest data collection is done via the ESXi hosts using the installed VMware tools. However, for collecting readiness data directly from database instances, collector must have network line of sight to the target SQL server instances. 
-> - Identifying server dependencies and in-depth discovery of MySQL/PostgreSQL instances using MySQL/PostgreSQL accounts are not supported in this version of Collector.
+> - Identifying server dependencies and in-depth discovery of MySQL and PostgreSQL instances is not supported in this version of Collector.
 
 ## Collect data from physical servers: 
 The same Azure migrate collector can be used to discover both VMware machines and physical servers that’s hypervisor agnostic. To collect data about physical servers, switch the fabric type at the top to physical.