Improve clarity and brevity in discovery articles

Author: Molishv

articles/migrate/discovery-methods-modes.md

@@ -26,7 +26,7 @@ This article explains the different discovery methods in Azure Migrate and gives
 | Mode of Discovery | Continuous data collection | One-time data collection, manually upload the collected data to Azure | Upload pre-existing inventory files |
 | Time to Discover | Requires setup time | Quick to setup | Instant (reuse existing inventory data) |
 | Assessment Types | Lift and Shift, Modernize | Lift and Shift, Modernize | Lift and Shift |
-| Perf-based Assessment | Yes | Yes | No |
+| Performance based Assessment | Yes | Yes | No |
 | Guest Discovery (installed software, security insights, database instances) | Yes | Yes | No |
 | Security insights | Yes | Yes | No |
 | Workload Discovery (Webapps, SQL, PostgreSQL, MySQL) | Yes | Yes | No |
@@ -65,7 +65,7 @@ Ensure that software inventory is enabled before initiating workload discovery.
 
 ## Collector-based discovery
 
-The collector-based discovery method involves deploying a lightweight virtual appliance that scans your environment offline to collect metadata about resources. This approach is ideal for scenarios where quick discovery of your IT estate is required. It supports discovery of VMware environments and physical or virtual servers in a hypervisor-agnostic approach.
+Azure Migrate collector enables offline discovery of IT esate. Using this lightweight tool, you can collect server configuration, performance, software inventory, and workload metadata without requiring connectivity to Azure during discovery. You can securely upload the collected data back to the Azure Migrate project you created. This approach is ideal for scenarios where quick discovery of your IT estate is required. It supports the discovery of VMware environments and physical or virtual servers in a hypervisor-agnostic approach.
 
 ### Key features
 

articles/migrate/how-to-discover-using-collector.md

@@ -14,8 +14,9 @@ ms.custom: engagement-fy26
 
 # Discover servers & workloads using Azure Migrate collector
 
-This article explains how to use Azure Migrate collector to discover servers and workloads running in your IT estate. The collected inventory data can be used to generate quick business case and perf-based assessment reports to support lift & shift migration and modernization of your IT estate. 
-You can deploy Azure Migrate collector in any supported version of Windows Server Machine that has network line of sight to vCenter to discover servers, performance data, software running on the servers, SQL Server, and PostgreSQL database instances and Web apps (.NET on IIS and Java on Tomcat). The Azure Migrate Collector doesn't require connectivity to Azure, helping customers save time typically spent on obtaining networking and Azure access approvals. It allows customers to flexibly scan their IT estate locally and upload the data securely on their own terms. Azure Migrate collector can be used to discover VMware estate or discover individual Windows and Linux servers running in any Hypervisor or public cloud. 
+This article explains how to use Azure Migrate collector to quickly discover servers and workloads across your IT estate without needing direct Azure connectivity. You deploy the collector on a Windows Server to scan VMware environments and physical or virtual servers. The collected inventory data can be used to generate quick business case, perf-based assessment reports to support lift & shift migration and modernization of your IT estate. 
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+Azure Migrate collector can discover your VMware estate or individual Windows and Linux servers running on any hypervisor or public cloud. You can gather server configurations, performance metrics, installed software, SQL Server and PostgreSQL database instances, and web apps (.NET on IIS and Java on Tomcat). Because the collector doesn't require connectivity to Azure, you can scan your IT estate locally and upload data securely on your own terms—saving time typically spent obtaining networking and Azure access approvals. 
 
 
 ## Collect data from VMware estate