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Author: Celiazhou1

support/azure/azure-kubernetes/create-upgrade-delete/aks-increased-memory-usage-cgroup-v2.md

@@ -34,7 +34,7 @@ This increase is caused by a change in memory accounting within version 2 of the
 
 - If you see a higher eviction rate on the pods, [use higher limits and requests for pods](/azure/aks/developer-best-practices-resource-management#define-pod-resource-requests-and-limits).
 
-- cgroup v2 uses a different API than cgroup v1. If there are any applications that directly access the cgroup file system, update them to newer versions that support cgroup v2. For example:
+- cgroup v2 uses a different API than cgroup v1. If there are any applications that directly access the cgroup file system, update them to later versions that support cgroup v2. For example:
 
   - **Third-party monitoring and security agents**:
 
@@ -54,7 +54,7 @@ This increase is caused by a change in memory accounting within version 2 of the
 
 > [!IMPORTANT]
 > - Use the DaemonSet cautiously. Test it in a lower environment before applying to production to ensure compatibility and prevent disruptions.
-> - By default, the DaemonSet applies to all nodes in the cluster and will reboot them to implement the cgroup change.  
+> - By default, the DaemonSet applies to all nodes in the cluster and reboots them to implement the cgroup change.  
 > - To control how the DaemonSet is applied, configure a `nodeSelector` to target specific nodes.