Update troubleshooting steps for Azure VM login issue

Author: genlin

support/azure/virtual-machines/windows/applying-group-policy-environment-policy.md

@@ -1,32 +1,32 @@
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-title: Applying Group Policy Environment Policy
+title: Azure VM login stops responding at "Applying Group Policy Environment".
 description: Troubleshooting steps for an Azure virtual machine (VM) that is stuck booting with message "Applying Group Policy Environment Policy".
 ms.date: 03/03/2025
 ms.service: azure-virtual-machines
 ms.collection: windows
 ms.custom: sap:My VM is not booting
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-# Applying Group Policy Environment Policy
+# Azure VM login hangs at "Applying Group Policy Environment"
 
 **Applies to:** :heavy_check_mark: Windows VMs
 
 This article provides steps to troubleshoot issues where a Windows VM is stuck booting with message "Applying Group Policy Environment Policy" displayed in Boot Diagnostics.
 
 ## Symptom
 
-When you use [Boot diagnostics](./boot-diagnostics.md) to view the screenshot of the VM, you see that the OS has not completed the boot process and is displaying the message **Applying Group Policy Environment policy**.
+When you use [Boot diagnostics](./boot-diagnostics.md) to view the screenshot of the VM, you see that the OS hasn't completed the boot process and is displaying the message **Applying Group Policy Environment policy**.
 
 :::image type="content" source="media/applying-group-policy-environment-policy/ApplyingGroupPolicyEnvironmentPolicy.png" alt-text="Screenshot of Windows operating system displaying the message 'Applying Group Policy Environment Policy'.":::
 
 ## Cause
 
-At this time, additional investigation is needed as the specific cause is unkonwn.
+At this time, extra investigation is needed as the specific cause is unknown.
 
 ## Solution
 
 For this scenario, a memory dump is required to troubleshoot the issue further and diagnose the problem.
 
-Please follow [this article](./collect-os-memory-dump-file.md) to collect a memory dump. Then proceed with [creating a support request](https://ms.portal.azure.com/#blade/Microsoft_Azure_Support/HelpAndSupportBlade/overview?DMC=troubleshoot).
+Follow [this article](./collect-os-memory-dump-file.md) to collect a memory dump. Then proceed with [creating a support request](https://ms.portal.azure.com/#blade/Microsoft_Azure_Support/HelpAndSupportBlade/overview?DMC=troubleshoot).
 
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