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Author: v-phoebh

support/windows-server/active-directory/lds-service-startup-fails.md

@@ -12,7 +12,7 @@ ms.custom:
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 # LDS service startup fails after you manually change msDS-Behavior-Version in Windows Server
 
-This article provides a solution to an error that LDS service startup fails after you manually change the **msDS-Behavior-Version** attribute.
+This article provides a solution to an error that the LDS service startup fails after you manually change the **msDS-Behavior-Version** attribute.
 
 _Applies to:_   All supported versions of Windows Server and Windows Client  
 _Original KB number:_   4550446
@@ -49,4 +49,4 @@ Additionally, you receive the following error message:
 
 :::image type="content" source="media/lds-service-startup-fails/error-message.png" alt-text="Error 0xc0000025 Windows could not start the L D S service on Local Computer.":::
 
-For Windows Server with monthly updates before the February 2025 update rollup installed, manually setting the **msDS-Behavior-Version** attribute value of LDS instances to **7** is not supported. To resolve the issue, install the February 2025 update rollup or a later version.
+For Windows Servers with monthly updates before the February 2025 update rollup installed, manually setting the **msDS-Behavior-Version** attribute value of LDS instances to **7** isn't supported. To resolve the issue, install the February 2025 update rollup or a later version.