Update personal-email.md

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support/azure/partner-solutions/astro/personal-email.md

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 title: Unable to install Astro using a personal email
-description: Learn why installing Apache Airflow on Astro from the Azure Marketplace isn't supported with a personal email and how to resolve the issue.
+description: Discusses why installing Apache Airflow on Astronomer from Azure Marketplace by using a personal email account isn't supported, and how to resolve the problem.
 author: ProfessorKendrick
 ms.author: jarrettr
 ms.reviewer: kkendrick
@@ -9,31 +9,32 @@ ms.topic: troubleshooting-problem-resolution
 ms.date: 09/04/2025
 ai-usage: ai-assisted
 
-#customer intent: As an Azure user, I want to understand why I can't install Astro with a personal email so that I can successfully deploy Apache Airflow.
+#customer intent: As an Azure user, I want to understand why I can't install Astronomer by using a personal email account so that I can successfully deploy Apache Airflow.
 
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-# Can't install Astro using a personal email
+# Can't install Astronomer using a personal email account
 
-If you're trying to install Apache Airflow on Astro from the Microsoft Azure Marketplace using a personal email from a generic domain, you can encounter issues. This article explains why this happens and how to resolve them.
+You might experience errors if you try to install Apache Airflow on Astronomer from the Microsoft Azure Marketplace by using a personal email account. This article explains why the errors occur and how to resolve them.
 
 ## Prerequisites
 
-- Access to the Azure portal.
-- An email address associated with a unique domain (like work or school).
-- Subscription owner permissions in Azure.
+- Access to the Azure portal
+- An email address that's associated with a unique domain (such as work or school)
+- Subscription owner permissions in Azure
 
 ## Symptoms
 
-- You're unable to install Astro with a personal email (for example, Gmail, Yahoo, or Outlook).
-- You get an error or warning message indicating an unsupported email domain.
+If you try to install Apache Airflow on Astronomer by using a personal email account (for example, Outlook, Gmail, or Yahoo), the installation fails, and you receive an error or warning message that states that the email domain is unsupported.
 
 ## Cause
 
-Astro installation from the Azure Marketplace doesn't support personal emails from generic domains. The service requires an email address with a unique domain, typically associated with an organization, school, or business.
+Astronomer installation from the Azure Marketplace doesn't support personal email accounts from generic domains. The service requires an email address that has a unique domain that's typically associated with an organization, school, or business.
 
 ## Solution
 
-1. Use an email address with a unique domain (for example, your organization's email).
-2. Alternatively, create a new user in Azure with a unique domain and assign subscription owner permissions.
-3. Retry the Astro installation from the Azure Marketplace.
+To resolve this problem, follow these steps:
+
+1. Use an email address that has a unique domain (for example, your organization's email domain).
+2. Create a new user in Azure that has a unique domain, and assign subscription owner permissions to that user.
+3. Retry the Astronomer installation from the Azure Marketplace.