Fix typos and improve clarity in documentation

Edit review per CI 5103

Author: przlplx

support/azure/azure-kubernetes/storage/fail-to-mount-azure-disk-volume.md

@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
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-title: Unable to mount Azure disk volumes
+title: Unable to Mount Azure Disk Volumes
 description: Describes errors that occur when mounting Azure disk volumes fails, and provides solutions.
 ms.date: 03/22/2025
 author: genlin
@@ -14,9 +14,9 @@ This article provides solutions for errors that cause the mounting of Azure disk
 
 ## Symptoms
 
-You're trying to deploy a Kubernetes resource such as a Deployment or a StatefulSet, in an Azure Kubernetes Service (AKS) environment. The deployment will create a pod that should mount a PersistentVolumeClaim (PVC) referencing an Azure disk.
+You're trying to deploy a Kubernetes resource, such as a Deployment or a StatefulSet, in an Azure Kubernetes Service (AKS) environment. The deployment creates a pod that should mount a PersistentVolumeClaim (PVC) that references an Azure disk.
 
-However, the pod stays in the **ContainerCreating** status. When you run the `kubectl describe pods` command, you may see one of the following errors, which causes the mounting operation to fail:
+However, the pod stays in the **ContainerCreating** status. When you run the `kubectl describe pods` command, you may see one of the following errors that cause the mounting operation to fail:
 
 - [Disk cannot be attached to the VM because it is not in the same zone as the VM](#error1)
 - [Client '\<client-ID>' with object id '\<object-ID>' doesn't have authorization to perform action over scope '\<disk name>' or scope is invalid](#error2)
@@ -25,7 +25,7 @@ However, the pod stays in the **ContainerCreating** status. When you run the `ku
 - [ApplyFSGroup failed for vol](#error5)
 - [Node(s) exceed max volume count](#error6)
 
-See the following sections for error details, possible causes and solutions.
+See the following sections for error details, possible causes, and solutions.
 
 ## <a id="error1"></a>Disk cannot be attached to the VM because it is not in the same zone as the VM
 
@@ -48,13 +48,13 @@ RawError:
 
 ### Cause: Disk and node hosting pod are in different zones
 
-In AKS, the default and other built-in StorageClasses for Azure disks use [locally redundant storage (LRS)](/azure/storage/common/storage-redundancy#locally-redundant-storage). These disks are deployed in [availability zones](/azure/aks/availability-zones). If you use the node pool in AKS with availability zones, and the pod is scheduled on a node that's in another availability zone different from the disk, you may get this error.
+In AKS, the default and other built-in storage classes for Azure disks use [locally redundant storage (LRS)](/azure/storage/common/storage-redundancy#locally-redundant-storage). These disks are deployed in [availability zones](/azure/aks/availability-zones). If you use the node pool in AKS together with availability zones, and the pod is scheduled on a node that's in another availability zone that's different from the disk, you might experience this error.
 
-To resolve this error, use one of the following solutions:
+To resolve this error, use one of the following solutions.
 
 ### Solution 1: Ensure disk and node hosting the pod are in the same zone
 
-To make sure the disk and node that hosts the pod are in the same availability zone, use [node affinity](https://kubernetes.io/docs/tasks/configure-pod-container/assign-pods-nodes-using-node-affinity/).
+To make sure that the disk and node that host the pod are in the same availability zone, use [node affinity](https://kubernetes.io/docs/tasks/configure-pod-container/assign-pods-nodes-using-node-affinity/).
 
 Refer to the following script as an example:
 
@@ -70,19 +70,19 @@ affinity:
         - <region>-Y
 ```
 
-\<region> is the region of the AKS cluster. `Y` represents the availability zone of the disk, for example, westeurope-3.
+\<region> is the region of the AKS cluster. `Y` represents the availability zone of the disk (for example, westeurope-3).
 
 ### Solution 2: Use zone-redundant storage (ZRS) disks
 
 [ZRS](/azure/storage/common/storage-redundancy#zone-redundant-storage) disk volumes can be scheduled on all zone and non-zone agent nodes. For more information, see [Azure disk availability zone support](/azure/aks/availability-zones#azure-disk-availability-zone-support).
 
-To use a ZRS disk, create a new storage class with `Premium_ZRS` or `StandardSSD_ZRS`, and then deploy the PersistentVolumeClaim (PVC) referencing the storage.
+To use a ZRS disk, create a storage class by using `Premium_ZRS` or `StandardSSD_ZRS`, and then deploy the PersistentVolumeClaim (PVC) that references the storage.
 
 For more information about parameters, see [Driver Parameters](/azure/aks/azure-csi-files-storage-provision#storage-class-parameters-for-dynamic-persistentvolumes)
 
 ### Solution 3: Use Azure Files
 
-[Azure Files](/azure/storage/files/storage-files-introduction) is mounted by using NFS or SMB throughout network and it's not associated with availability zones.
+[Azure Files](/azure/storage/files/storage-files-introduction) is mounted by using NFS or SMB throughout network. It's not associated with availability zones.
 
 For more information, see the following articles:
 
@@ -108,11 +108,11 @@ RawError:
 
 ### Cause: AKS identity doesn't have required authorization over disk
 
-AKS cluster's identity doesn't have the required authorization over the Azure disk. This issue occurs when the disk is created in another resource group other than the infrastructure resource group of the AKS cluster.
+AKS cluster's identity doesn't have the required authorization over the Azure disk. This issue occurs if the disk is created in a resource group other than the infrastructure resource group of the AKS cluster.
 
 ### Solution: Create role assignment that includes required authorization
 
-Create a role assignment that includes the authorization required as per the error. We recommend that you use a [Contributor](/azure/role-based-access-control/built-in-roles/general#contributor) role. If you want to use another built-in role, see [Azure built-in roles](/azure/role-based-access-control/built-in-roles).
+Create a role assignment that includes the authorization required per the error. We recommend that you use a [Contributor](/azure/role-based-access-control/built-in-roles/general#contributor) role. If you want to use another built-in role, see [Azure built-in roles](/azure/role-based-access-control/built-in-roles).
 
 To assign a Contributor role, use one of the following methods:
 
@@ -136,9 +136,9 @@ Here are details of this error:
 
 ### Cause: Disk is mounted to multiple pods hosted on different nodes
 
-An Azure disk can be mounted only as [ReadWriteOnce](https://kubernetes.io/docs/concepts/storage/persistent-volumes/#access-modes), which makes it available to one node in AKS. That means it can be attached to only one node and mounted only to a pod hosted by that node. If you mount the same disk to a pod on another node, you'll get this error because the disk is already attached to a node.
+An Azure disk can be mounted only as [ReadWriteOnce](https://kubernetes.io/docs/concepts/storage/persistent-volumes/#access-modes). This makes it available to one node in AKS. That means that it can be attached to only one node and mounted to only a pod that's hosted by that node. If you mount the same disk to a pod on another node, you experience this error because the disk is already attached to a node.
 
-### Solution: Ensure disk isn't mounted by multiple pods hosted on different nodes
+### Solution: Make sure disk isn't mounted by multiple pods hosted on different nodes
 
 To resolve this error, refer to [Multi-Attach error](https://github.com/andyzhangx/demo/blob/master/issues/azuredisk-issues.md#25-multi-attach-error).
 
@@ -164,11 +164,11 @@ desc = Attach volume "/subscriptions/<subscription-ID>/resourceGroups/<disk-reso
 
 ### Cause: Ultra disk is attached to node pool with ultra disks disabled
 
-This error indicates that an [ultra disk](/azure/virtual-machines/disks-enable-ultra-ssd) is trying to be attached to a node pool with ultra disks disabled. By default, an ultra disk is disabled on AKS node pools.
+This error indicates that an [ultra disk](/azure/virtual-machines/disks-enable-ultra-ssd) is trying to be attached to a node pool by having ultra disks disabled. By default, an ultra disk is disabled on AKS node pools.
 
 ### Solution: Create a node pool that can use ultra disks
 
-To use ultra disks on AKS, create a node pool with ultra disks support by using the `--enable-ultra-ssd` flag. For more information, see [Use Azure ultra disks on Azure Kubernetes Service](/azure/aks/use-ultra-disks).
+To use ultra disks on AKS, create a node pool that has ultra disks support by using the `--enable-ultra-ssd` flag. For more information, see [Use Azure ultra disks on Azure Kubernetes Service](/azure/aks/use-ultra-disks).
 
 ## <a id="error5"></a>ApplyFSGroup failed for vol
 
@@ -178,15 +178,15 @@ Here are details of this error:
 
 ### Cause: Changing ownership and permissions for large volume takes much time
 
-When there's a large number of files already present in the volume, if a `securityContext` with `fsGroup` is in place, this error may occur. When there are lots of files and directories under one volume, changing the group ID would consume much time. It's also mentioned in the Kubernetes official documentation [Configure volume permission and ownership change policy for Pods](https://kubernetes.io/docs/tasks/configure-pod-container/security-context/#configure-volume-permission-and-ownership-change-policy-for-pods):
+If there are many files already present in the volume, and if a `securityContext` that uses `fsGroup` exists, this error might occur. If there are lots of files and directories in one volume, changing the group ID would consume excessive time. Additionally, the Kubernetes official documentation [Configure volume permission and ownership change policy for Pods](https://kubernetes.io/docs/tasks/configure-pod-container/security-context/#configure-volume-permission-and-ownership-change-policy-for-pods) mentions this situation:
 
 "By default, Kubernetes recursively changes ownership and permissions for the contents of each volume to match the `fsGroup` specified in a Pod's `securityContext` when that volume is mounted. For large volumes, checking and changing ownership and permissions can take much time, slowing Pod startup. You can use the `fsGroupChangePolicy` field inside a `securityContext` to control the way that Kubernetes checks and manages ownership and permissions for a volume."
 
 ### Solution: Set fsGroupChangePolicy field to OnRootMismatch
 
-To resolve this error, we recommend that you set `fsGroupChangePolicy: "OnRootMismatch"` in the `securityContext` of a Deployment, a StatefulSet or a pod.
+To resolve this error, we recommend that you set `fsGroupChangePolicy: "OnRootMismatch"` in the `securityContext` of a Deployment, a StatefulSet, or a pod.
 
-OnRootMismatch: Only change permissions and ownership if permission and ownership of root directory doesn't match with expected permissions of the volume. This setting could help shorten the time it takes to change ownership and permission of a volume.
+OnRootMismatch: Change permissions and ownership only if permission and ownership of the root directory doesn't match the expected permissions of the volume. This setting could help shorten the time that it takes to change ownership and permission of a volume.
 
 For more information, see [Configure volume permission and ownership change policy for Pods](https://kubernetes.io/docs/tasks/configure-pod-container/security-context/#configure-volume-permission-and-ownership-change-policy-for-pods).
 
@@ -202,11 +202,11 @@ Warning FailedScheduling 25s  default-scheduler 0/8 nodes are available: 8 node(
 ```
 ### Cause: Maximum disk limit is reached
 
-The node has reached its maximum disk capacity. In AKS, the number of disks per node depends on the VM size configured for the node pool.
+The node has reached its maximum disk capacity. In AKS, the number of disks per node depends on the VM size that's configured for the node pool.
 
 ### Solution: Use anotehr VM size with more disk limits
 
-To resolve the issue, we recommend using another VM size that supports more disks for the node.
+To resolve the issue, we recommend that you use another VM size that supports more disks for the node.
 
 Additionally, make sure that the number of disks per node does not exceed the [Kubernetes default limits](https://kubernetes.io/docs/concepts/storage/storage-limits/#kubernetes-default-limits).