Update troubleshoot-windows-update-error-0x80072f8f.md

Author: ryanberg-aquent

support/windows-server/installing-updates-features-roles/troubleshoot-windows-update-error-0x80072f8f.md

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 ## Summary
 
-When attempting to connect to Windows Update, you might encounter error 0x80072f8f. This error usually indicates issues with SSL negotiation due to out-of-sync clock settings or untrusted SSL certificates. 
+When trying to connect to Windows Update, you encounter error 0x80072f8f. This error usually indicates issues with SSL negotiation due to out-of-sync clock settings or untrusted SSL certificates. 
 
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 ## Root cause
 
-The error 0x80072f8f is usually caused by one of the following issues:
+This error is usually caused by one of the following issues:
 
 - **Out-of-sync clock**: If the clock settings on the computer are incorrect, SSL negotiation fails. You can quickly verify clock accuracy from `WindowsUpdate.log` that always prints traces in local time.
 - **Untrusted SSL certificate**: In managed scenarios with Windows Server Update Services (WSUS) or Configuration Manager configured over SSL with self-generated or signed SSL certificates, if the client doesn't trust the certificate chain, the scan fails.
 
 ## Resolution
 
-Perform an [in-place upgrade](/azure/virtual-machines/windows-in-place-upgrade) on the Windows virtual machine.
+Perform an [in-place upgrade](/azure/virtual-machines/windows-in-place-upgrade) on the Windows virtual machine (VM).