Update troubleshooting steps for Azure VM startup issue

Edit review per CI 5289

Author: przlplx

support/azure/virtual-machines/windows/applying-group-policy-environment-policy.md

@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
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 title: Windows VM startup is stuck on "Applying Group Policy Environment policy" in Microsoft Azure
-description: Troubleshooting steps for an Azure virtual machine (VM) that is stuck booting with message "Applying Group Policy Environment policy".
+description: Provides troubleshooting steps for an Azure virtual machine (VM) that is stuck in startup with message, "Applying Group Policy Environment policy."
 ms.date: 03/03/2025
 author: cwhitley-MSFT 
 ms.author: cwhitley
@@ -13,22 +13,21 @@ ms.custom: sap:My VM is not booting
 
 **Applies to:** :heavy_check_mark: Windows VMs
 
-This article describes an issue that Azure Windows virtual machine (VM) startup is stuck on the **Applying Group Policy Environment policy** screen.
+This article discusses an issue that causes a Microsoft Azure virtual machine (VM) to get stuck during startup on the **Applying Group Policy Environment policy** screen.
 
-## Symptom
+## Symptoms
 
-A Windows VM doesn't start. When you use [Boot diagnostics](./boot-diagnostics.md) to view the screenshot of the VM, you see that the Windows operating system displays the message **Applying Group Policy Environment policy**.
-
-:::image type="content" source="media/applying-group-policy-environment-policy/ApplyingGroupPolicyEnvironmentPolicy.png" alt-text="Screenshot of Windows operating system displaying the message 'Applying Group Policy Environment Policy'.":::
+A Windows VM doesn't start. When you use [Boot diagnostics](./boot-diagnostics.md) to view the screenshot of the VM, you see that the Windows operating system displays the message, **Applying Group Policy Environment policy**.
 
+:::image type="content" source="media/applying-group-policy-environment-policy/ApplyingGroupPolicyEnvironmentPolicy.png" alt-text="Screenshot of Windows operating system displaying the message, 'Applying Group Policy Environment policy'.":::
 ## Cause
 
-Further investigation is required to determine the specific cause.
+Further investigation is required to determine the specific cause of this issue.
 
 ## Collect memory dump for troubleshooting
 
-For this scenario, a memory dump is required to troubleshoot and diagnose the issue.
+For this scenario, Azure Support requires a memory dump in order to be able to troubleshoot and diagnose the issue.
 
-Follow the steps in [this article](./collect-os-memory-dump-file.md) to collect a memory dump. Then proceed with [creating a support request](https://ms.portal.azure.com/#blade/Microsoft_Azure_Support/HelpAndSupportBlade/overview?DMC=troubleshoot).
+Follow the steps in [this article](./collect-os-memory-dump-file.md) to collect a memory dump. Then, [create a support request](https://ms.portal.azure.com/#blade/Microsoft_Azure_Support/HelpAndSupportBlade/overview?DMC=troubleshoot).
 
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