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Author: v-phoebh

support/windows-server/windows-security/kerberos-protocol-registry-kdc-configuration-keys.md

@@ -231,7 +231,7 @@ The registry entries that are listed in this section must be added to the follow
   - Default value: 0
   - Possible values: 0 (false) or any non-zero value (true)
 
-    This value indicates whether IP addresses will be added in the Ticket-Granting Service Reply (TGS_REP). If the resource server enforces validation of this optional field and detects that there's no match between the client's IP address and the ticket's value, then the error KRB_AP_ERR_BADADDR ("Incorrect net address") is returned and the logon fails.
+    This value indicates whether IP addresses will be added in the Ticket-Granting Service Reply (TGS_REP). If the resource server enforces validation of this optional field and detects a mismatch between the client's IP address and the ticket's value, the error KRB_AP_ERR_BADADDR ("Incorrect net address") is returned, and the logon fails.
 
 - Entry: KdcDontCheckAddresses