Updates from editor

Author: v-phoebh

support/windows-365/oobe-fails-error-has-occurred.md

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-title: OOBE Fails With Error "An Error Has Occurred"
-description: Helps resolve the error "An error has occurred" during the Windows Out of Box Experience (OOBE).
+title: OOBE Fails with Error an Error Has Occurred
+description: Helps resolve the error An error has occurred during the Windows Out of Box Experience (OOBE).
 manager: dcscontentpm
 ms.date: 04/01/2025
 ms.topic: troubleshooting
@@ -14,7 +14,7 @@ ms.collection:
 
 This article helps resolve the error "An error has occurred" during the Windows Out of Box Experience (OOBE).
 
-When you first turn on Windows 365 Link, the OOBE is loaded to guide you through the process of joining the device to your Microsoft Entra tenant and enrolling the device into Intune management. If a failure occurs, you might encounter the following error message:
+When you first turn on Windows 365 Link, OOBE is loaded to guide you through the process of joining the device to your Microsoft Entra tenant and enrolling the device into Intune management. If a failure occurs, you might encounter the following error message:
 
 > Let's add your Microsoft account  
 An error has occurred. Please try again.
@@ -25,8 +25,8 @@ This error commonly occurs due to the following reasons:
 - Join limits
 - Enrollment restrictions
 
-To complete the OOBE, ensure the following items:
+To complete OOBE, ensure the following items:
 
-- You're allowed to join Windows devices to Microsoft Entra. For more information about the configuration details, see [Allow joining Windows 365 Link to Microsoft Entra](/windows-365/link/join-microsoft-entra).
-- You don't exceed the maximum number of devices allowed to join to Microsoft Entra ID. For more information about the configuration details, see [Allow joining Windows 365 Link to Microsoft Entra](/windows-365/link/join-microsoft-entra).
-- You aren't blocked by platform restrictions that prevent enrolling Windows devices in Intune management. For more information about the configuration details, see [Configure enrollment restrictions for Windows 365 Link devices](/windows-365/link/enrollment-restrictions).
+- You're allowed to join Windows devices to Microsoft Entra. For configuration details, see [Allow joining Windows 365 Link to Microsoft Entra](/windows-365/link/join-microsoft-entra).
+- You don't exceed the maximum number of devices allowed to join Microsoft Entra ID. For configuration details, see [Allow joining Windows 365 Link to Microsoft Entra](/windows-365/link/join-microsoft-entra).
+- You aren't blocked by platform restrictions that prevent you from enrolling Windows devices in Intune management. For configuration details, see [Configure enrollment restrictions for Windows 365 Link devices](/windows-365/link/enrollment-restrictions).